|Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp Summer 2011 Sultry, Malicious|
| Rene2608 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
It is so wonderful to have you back, you were missed.
And what a way to come back... This was very different and interesting.
Hope your kids and you are doing great,
| india-rose chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Always beautiful. Always poetic. Always with such imagery. Such a sad but lovely prose. Unexpected but somehow fitting for "sultry". Thank you for this. I'm glad to see you back. You and your words have been missed.
| Lady Gwynedd chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
I've missed your writing.
This looks to be a good one. :)
| LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
So happy to see you back writing! Is that baby letting you get some writing time in? HA! If he's anything like mine was at that age, that would be no. Your words are beautiful.
| anniefaerie chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Oooh, I REALLY like this. It's good to read something from you again, it's been a while. I would love to read more of this story, for sure.
| reve2weaver chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
I love the dislocation of the opening lines; a funeral, but the imagery of a beach and the women mindlessly fanning herself; it made me 'feel' the uncomfortable skin the speaker, whose distance from the young man's funeral became more and more apparent from the the poignant and sparse conversation in a parking lot and someone else who is wearing familiar skin, and equally uncomfortable.
Nothing like an opening that fills you with the urge to turn the page...
| Lizzie1211 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
You have me very intrigued. I wonder how long it will take her to read the note & if it's one of hers or one of Masen's. I can't wait to see how E&B's relationship develops. Poor B, she seems to be portrayed at the funeral as the other woman, but in reality it seems that they had been dating longer than M & the blonde. so many questions...
| suzyq402 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
OMG! whats in the note! please continue...
| LMBB chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
That was sad and leaves me wanting more. I'm so glad to see you back writing because I LOVE reading what you write. Hope all is well with you and your family.
| Kat Ksm chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Thrilled to see you back! Wow, you want to start us off with a bang, huh? My stomach is dropping for Bella. What a scenario to be put into. Looking forward to more of your writing!
| ahz chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
You're back! I hope you're enjoying your little one. This is a somber start but I hope this story has a happy ending.
| MillieD chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Like this already. Glad you are back.
| 2BEdwardspet chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
... and once again I am hooked...
Thanks for writing again and I I can't wait for more!
| TwiAggie94 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
RA - That killed me. Beauitiful and different. I could very much see the scene you painted with your words.
| Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011