Reviews for Hocus Pocus!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/25
I is like you have droped of the face of earth it hasn't bem update for 2 years know pleeeeease update or i might burst
Haruno Asahi chapter 6 . 1/24
noooooooooooo...
just read this story, then looked at the last updating date...
please continue please, please, please...
it's a really nice concept so it would be sad to not see this story finish...

One little remark, when you want to separate parts in the text like POVs, time slips or AUs, there's this tool in the editing area next to the outlining tool (it's a single line like this '-') that effectively separates the text.
(I tell you this because I read my fics on my smartphone and every time someone writes long lines without spaces like ':D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D' it becomes difficult to read because the screen, whenever scrolling downwards also goes side-wards :-( )

ugh I hate it when 'little' remarks turn out to be bigger than the rest of my review, so i'll make it up by stating that: "I really like your story so come back soon with more !"
xx
Asahi
RRW chapter 6 . 8/5/2012
Oh too funny...Hermione and Ron (I wonder if he is gay) read the Gravitation series...I wonder if the Hogwarts crew would go to their storyline?
Lizzybear54 chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
Loved it and I can't wait for the next one! :D

Lizzy
so-adorabloodthirsty chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Pretty good. I know it doesn't happen until their next year, but I think it'd be cool if something with a boggart happened. And I still really want them to kiss in public..,
ahbuggrit chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Hmm... I suppose it is a little rushed in comparison to some other chapters... but honestly, I didn't even think of it until I read your author's note.
I had to laugh at poor Shu as he was accompanied by Snape! xD My worst nightmare, I think.
I do love how Shu gets jealous of Yuki and Eiri... cute.
I was really surprised that Hermoine recognised them from the manga! It's a very interesting idea, and it somehow works in a world of magic. More surprising was that Ron had read them all! xD
Update before you dare put up another fic! :P
ahbuggrit chapter 5 . 6/9/2012
"Wait, that dumb fuck is the bad guy?"

xD lmao, my exact thoughts when I first watched the movie (it somehow made more sense in the book).

Thank you for the promise of no shota - when I discovered that both Yuki and Shu look eleven, I got a bit worried. Still, I like the romance scene between them - it was really cute x)

and suuurree, in the name of study ;P
RRW chapter 5 . 6/7/2012
Man, I just want them to find the ROR so they can spend some time together.
RRW chapter 4 . 6/7/2012
Poor Shuichi...he seems so lonely in Hufflepuff. ALthough I do think he should act as if he is a seer or something to take care of Voldie earlier.
Lizzybear54 chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
Yay! Finally a lil' yaoi! X3

I squealed when I found out that you updated again!

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Lizzy
so-adorabloodthirsty chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
So they kissed :)...but not in front of everyone. :(
angelallie15 chapter 4 . 6/5/2012
More plz it's really good I like it but it's sad that shu has 2 b away from yuki :( but I hope he can change things 4 the better
ahbuggrit chapter 4 . 6/1/2012
Oh Shuichi... you got something right in the classroom for once! :P Lol. Nice to see Hermoine wasn't acting all snotty because he beat her to success.

Poor Shuichi and Yuki. Although, how does Yuki qualify for first year? :P

Update AFTER exams :) :P
Lizzybear54 chapter 4 . 5/31/2012
Awww, I was kinda hoping that Yuki and Shuichi would meet up with each other but I guess I can wait till the next chapter. This chapter was pretty amusing and I loved the fact that Shuichi is completing spells faster than Hermione. XD

Can't wait until the next one so update soon! :D

Lizzy
so-adorabloodthirsty chapter 4 . 5/30/2012
*blinks* But... That's it? You should've just done the scene. And I REALLY want someone to see them kiss or something...
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