|Reviews for Bella and the Cliff|
| sugarishfreak chapter 11 . 2/20
.GOD. you killed JACOB! hahhaha you're so mean I was really getting into your story and suddenly I blink my eyes and JAKE IS GONE? and what about charlie? Not that it affected my whole judgement, on the contrary I really enjoy your story and will be reading the sequel for sure!
you're a great writer so continue updating :)
| Amu4ever chapter 9 . 10/30/2013
Oh man...don't kill Charlie, that would be really bad
Haha...Edward so deserved that *evil laughter*
| Amu4ever chapter 8 . 10/30/2013
Hmm...edward annoys me so much...
But the story is still interesting :)
| Amu4ever chapter 7 . 10/30/2013
Hmm...not much to say to that...
| Amu4ever chapter 6 . 10/29/2013
Huh...Edward shouldn't have killed him, I mean that he attacked Bella, because he couldn't control his rage was bad, but on the other hand Jacob was still her best friend. I mean Edward could have reacted more diplomatically (not that he would have thought much in this state). And besides that Jacob DID have some good points. I mean Edward really behaved like an a**, which doesn't give Jake the permission to go on a rampage either, but...hey the treaty is getting completly ignored here. And shouldn't Edwards first reaction be to throw Jacob out the window or at least out of the way to get to his "soul mate"? Not that I think they are real soul mates, after all Edward wouldn't have been able to let Bella back in the woods completly broken like he did. It's kind of against - and I mean the complete opposite - of what I assume a real soul mate would do. I mean hurting your mate like that, would hurt you too, right? I mean, if he is your soul mate then there should be some sort of connection between them, which should prevent such stupidty. Or at least Edward should have felt pain the whole time while she was all alone so far away, I mean wouldn't it hurt to have one part of your soul so far away?
| Amu4ever chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
Okay that's just unreallistic and brutal...where the f*** are the other members of her family? You said before the were in the house, right? Then why didn't they come in? And wouldn't Jasper feel that there was something wrong? And how did Jacob even manage to get in the house? I mean it is FULL OF VAMPIRES! And he wouldn't endanger Bella like this! The whole scene just doesn't make sense
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 9 . 7/29/2013
Lol didnt see that coming! But please let Bella fall in love again with Edward. And btw i dont know how long ago you write this chapter but i want to say to you. Think, believe,achieve dont let anyone tell you that you cant achieve something you want. Surround yourself with people who makes you laugh even its fictional :p like Alice. No serious please know we are Twilight family And we love you anyway twilighters stick together!
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 8 . 7/29/2013
I hope Bella Will get part of her memory back..speaking of her memory read object of the mind its my BFF's story she is also team Edward but she writes also amazing! Just like
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 7 . 7/29/2013
Finally i got to know your name. I never heard THE name Jerin. But it is Nice :)
And btw nice chapter!
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 5 . 7/29/2013
I loved it because Im totally team Edward i should put THE dog to sleep for
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 3 . 7/29/2013
Just like i said this is better because edward is here..
| TwilighterSam1989 chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
Youre so funny And i think you should replace Chris weitz this is better then THE real new moon just because Edward is here instead of THE dog.
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
What the fuck?! Yu just suddenly make Edward snap his neck. I refuse to read on wards. Of u didn't spend so much time writing authors notes you would have a better story
| I Know I'm A Dreamer chapter 11 . 2/9/2013
| I Know I'm A Dreamer chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
Your story is very rushed . . . Hmm
*Will only enjoy shopping for books*