|Reviews for Selkies Bride|
| Nana3212 chapter 8 . 11/24/2013
UPDATE. UPDATE. YEILD TO THE UPDATE. /shot XD I should shut up now. But still, update please? :3
| Levi Ashworth chapter 8 . 11/8/2013
It's been a year. This piece is amazing, and we would all be grateful if an update could be made.
| Fyngirl chapter 8 . 10/16/2013
Please, oh please continue this! It is such a brilliant story!
| Roseflame44 chapter 8 . 6/29/2013
Please update! I want to know what happens
| roughdiamond5 chapter 8 . 1/3/2013
YOU'RE in torment? How do you think I feel, not having any more to read? Honestly, the moment Matthias decides to change and romance actually looks promising, there aren't any more chapters.
Okay, perhaps I'm being a little dramatic. This story wasn't perfect, after all. The tense sometimes changed from past to present, and there were many errors that would be easy to fix ("how" replaced with "Howe"? That's a little obvious of an error), and sometimes it seemed that you forgot certain details that were important to remember. Wasn't this whole confrontation with Berwald and Matthias happening while Nikolas was in a towel, after all? Then again, I could have missed such details because I was reading so quickly.
See, there's the beauty of the story: I was reading so quickly because I was dying to know what happened next, to see what about Silkies I would learn and to see if Nikolas and Matthias actually had a chance. I'm a huge DenNor fan, and this story only enhances that love; for one thing, it explains why Matthias is a jerk and why he and Berwald find it hard to get along, and it explains why Matthias feels more for Nikolas than any of us can understand.
But those last few paragraphs of Chapter 8 - those were the ones that made me fall in love with this story. Before then, I was fascinated but still on the fence because of the aforementioned writing style. Those paragraphs, however, confirmed to me that this story portrays emotions strongly and justly - nothing is overly dramatic because this is just how Silkies (and Matthias) work. That, and I got this wonderfully pitiful image of Matthias curled up in the back of the Volvo, giving up everything (including the rank he loves so much) for the mere chance of love in what may be the first emotionally mature move he's ever made.
I want to see more of this Matthias. I want to see Nikolas slowly but surely come to accept this Matthias. Hell, I just want to see more. So that's why I'm reviewing and alerting and favoriting this story - this story is a diamond in the rough, and I hope there will be more to come.
| Terra Saltt chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I knew it! I was thinking of another fic when I started complaining about this one! Ahhh I'm so sorry for criticizing it when I had the names mixed up! The one I was thinking of was a really long fic that had "bride" in the title, too, and I totes got confused. I’m a terrible person. T.T Forgive me...
This is definitely something I'm interested in, though that isn't hard to guess, what with me being a fantasy nut and all. ;) The beautiful similes and metaphors are a real treat, too, though I must say I found quite a few run-on sentences. Nothing too terrible, though, because my attention would not falter for a minute. I read the whole thing in one go and I just love the idea behind it! Very imaginative, while also reminding me of those awesome Animal Planet documentaries I love so much. You have me on the edge of my seat just wondering what will happen next! All the characters are wonderfully written, their decisions, emotions, and actions are totally realistic, and the animalistic nature of the Selkies effectively distinguishes them and adds mystery. I like how I can't sit here and root for one side, because you can't blame Mathias for doing what is in his nature and you can't blame Nikolas (*cough*LUKAS*cough*) for hating his guts at the moment. Everyone has something to overcome, and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. :)
And omg Berwald eating Tino’s fish. Priceless.
| SmileyFacesSmile chapter 8 . 12/26/2012
Please update! Please please please please please, this is such a great story! I'm dying with the anticipation! TT Please? Xxxxxxxx
| Tora-Star chapter 8 . 12/18/2012
I haven't read this till now and can't understand why I didn't pick this up sooner! I love it! I honestly didn't know about Selkies XD I know, shame on me. But you've definitely peaked my interest! Gahhh I love your writing and long chapters so much!
| washington-rain chapter 8 . 12/5/2012
I think it was cool how a few of the sentences started to rhyme and its really good to hear you'll be updating more because you have all the outlines done but does that mean this story will end soon? I really like it
| SmileyFacesSmile chapter 8 . 11/12/2012
Hi. I only found your story yesterday, and I LOVE IT. The way you write is so enchanting, and this sounds so so weird but I love the way you describe people's eyes. Your plot is so unique-I'm interested in mythical creatures so I was so happy when I found your story-and the character's own have their unque qualities. I like how you make Ber-Ber angry. :D Please keep updating. Please, please, please. I'm begging. xxxxxxx
| Moongirl12121 chapter 8 . 11/11/2012
I HOPE THE SELKIES AND THE DOLPHINS EAT YOUR FACE FOR HOW LONG I'VE HAD TO WAIT FOR THIS!
Btw whoa man, Matthias on land? LORD SELKIE MATTHIAS? Daaaaaaaammmmmnnnn!
I wanna hug you Norway!
| Terra Angel Of Earth chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
there is a song like this is it the one that inspired you? The Maiden and the Selkie
| DancingOnRainbow chapter 8 . 11/8/2012
Hooray for updates! Bad selkies, stop tormenting poor author so the story can be updated more frequetly xD It seems that Tino and Berwald are going to teach Mathias how to live as a human - i pity them from the bottom of my heart, this is not going to be easy...
| starrynights1987 chapter 8 . 11/6/2012
Awesome as usual! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| KitsuneMagic48 chapter 8 . 11/4/2012
If u update before December ill help you fend off the dolphins. Otherwise I just don't know. I live your story and Ibreally want to see how things will turn out. I'd love to see a little more backstory on Tino and Berwald. I know you can do it! Your a good writer.