|Reviews for Selkies Bride|
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/3
Whhhyyyyyh didnt u update its so intresting already i was literally forcing my tab to scrol down for more. Give me more!
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/3
I laughed so hard at the part when" His eyes keeping watch of the table as if it might suddenly sprout wings and shit on the table"
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/3
Cool so cool man u must hv done alot of research about selkies. I appreciate ur efforts u did a gd job
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/3
Berwarld was also a selkie cant be finny hes to cute
| TheRawrCreature chapter 8 . 4/12
Author! You claim to have the rest of this story outlined but you haven't updated in years! Please don't give up on this story. The plot is compelling and the entirety of it is amazing. Unless you're dead; PLEASE UPDATE! (Or I will die.)
| briana.schmidt1 chapter 8 . 3/18
Please right more please. Also ask the selkies if I have to be *ahem* mated to join the water, and if I can bring my family. Lol
| just-the-narrator chapter 8 . 6/27/2014
I AM REALLY INTRIGUED BY THIS STORY IT'S REALLY INTERESTING AND I SINCERELY HOPE YOU HAVEN'T GIVEN UP ON IT.
| Nana3212 chapter 8 . 11/24/2013
UPDATE. UPDATE. YEILD TO THE UPDATE. /shot XD I should shut up now. But still, update please? :3
| Levi Ashworth chapter 8 . 11/8/2013
It's been a year. This piece is amazing, and we would all be grateful if an update could be made.
| Fyngirl chapter 8 . 10/16/2013
Please, oh please continue this! It is such a brilliant story!
| Roseflame44 chapter 8 . 6/29/2013
Please update! I want to know what happens
| roughdiamond5 chapter 8 . 1/3/2013
YOU'RE in torment? How do you think I feel, not having any more to read? Honestly, the moment Matthias decides to change and romance actually looks promising, there aren't any more chapters.
Okay, perhaps I'm being a little dramatic. This story wasn't perfect, after all. The tense sometimes changed from past to present, and there were many errors that would be easy to fix ("how" replaced with "Howe"? That's a little obvious of an error), and sometimes it seemed that you forgot certain details that were important to remember. Wasn't this whole confrontation with Berwald and Matthias happening while Nikolas was in a towel, after all? Then again, I could have missed such details because I was reading so quickly.
See, there's the beauty of the story: I was reading so quickly because I was dying to know what happened next, to see what about Silkies I would learn and to see if Nikolas and Matthias actually had a chance. I'm a huge DenNor fan, and this story only enhances that love; for one thing, it explains why Matthias is a jerk and why he and Berwald find it hard to get along, and it explains why Matthias feels more for Nikolas than any of us can understand.
But those last few paragraphs of Chapter 8 - those were the ones that made me fall in love with this story. Before then, I was fascinated but still on the fence because of the aforementioned writing style. Those paragraphs, however, confirmed to me that this story portrays emotions strongly and justly - nothing is overly dramatic because this is just how Silkies (and Matthias) work. That, and I got this wonderfully pitiful image of Matthias curled up in the back of the Volvo, giving up everything (including the rank he loves so much) for the mere chance of love in what may be the first emotionally mature move he's ever made.
I want to see more of this Matthias. I want to see Nikolas slowly but surely come to accept this Matthias. Hell, I just want to see more. So that's why I'm reviewing and alerting and favoriting this story - this story is a diamond in the rough, and I hope there will be more to come.
| Terra Saltt chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I knew it! I was thinking of another fic when I started complaining about this one! Ahhh I'm so sorry for criticizing it when I had the names mixed up! The one I was thinking of was a really long fic that had "bride" in the title, too, and I totes got confused. I’m a terrible person. T.T Forgive me...
This is definitely something I'm interested in, though that isn't hard to guess, what with me being a fantasy nut and all. ;) The beautiful similes and metaphors are a real treat, too, though I must say I found quite a few run-on sentences. Nothing too terrible, though, because my attention would not falter for a minute. I read the whole thing in one go and I just love the idea behind it! Very imaginative, while also reminding me of those awesome Animal Planet documentaries I love so much. You have me on the edge of my seat just wondering what will happen next! All the characters are wonderfully written, their decisions, emotions, and actions are totally realistic, and the animalistic nature of the Selkies effectively distinguishes them and adds mystery. I like how I can't sit here and root for one side, because you can't blame Mathias for doing what is in his nature and you can't blame Nikolas (*cough*LUKAS*cough*) for hating his guts at the moment. Everyone has something to overcome, and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. :)
And omg Berwald eating Tino’s fish. Priceless.
| SmileyFacesSmile chapter 8 . 12/26/2012
Please update! Please please please please please, this is such a great story! I'm dying with the anticipation! TT Please? Xxxxxxxx
| Tora-Star chapter 8 . 12/18/2012
I haven't read this till now and can't understand why I didn't pick this up sooner! I love it! I honestly didn't know about Selkies XD I know, shame on me. But you've definitely peaked my interest! Gahhh I love your writing and long chapters so much!