Reviews for The Merman
majose chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
This was awesome!
Lena chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Great chapter, love it!
feja chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
AMAZING - so glad I read this!
HeBelongstoMe chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
This was hilarious, sweet, and so much fun to read.

Thanks for sharing!
ssarrahh chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Very cute little o/s!

thanks for posting.

Whitney Love chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Yummy. Hot and a sweet ending. What more could you want? Loved it.


betsmecullen chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I'm so glad you are a RULE BREAKER! And I'm so ecstatic you're on my AA. I'm gonna be out on the back porch smoking my first cigarette ever and sipping an Amaretto Sour! (12 ounces at least) I agree with Irishyoga, continue this with a chapter of EPOV of the time between their fling and meeting up school and an epi. That would be awesome. Look how many reviews you got for this chapter alone! Anyway, good job. And I hope to see more. ;D Thank you so much, Angel.
Lov.Twii chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
One of the best o/s I've ever read, no lie. You are extremely talented
shecater chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I liked this. Nothin wrong with an older woman teaching a younger man the ways of pleasuring a woman. Go Bella!
tsm0836 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
What a great little story has everything. Especially love the ending. I often think that boys should go to a 'finishing school for sex'. How much of a service to women worldwide to have men that know what they are doing. Bliss. Thank you.
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
OOh he got under my skin too. Im way too old to be obsessed by all of this but loving being a cradle-robbing fanfic slut
noddin chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Loved this story!

Came here through a rec from RobMusement: .
sonia chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
bookonabeach chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
loved it!
Daintress chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
I like this one. It is so rare to see an age discrepancy in her favor. Nicely written!
433 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 22 .. Last Next »