Reviews for The Merman
frstmdllast chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Gosh, that was soooooo cute! I loved the ending, not keeping them separated even though they tried it that way. Definitely one hot Edward...
alchemilla chapter 1 . 8/25/2011

Ah, this hit the spot on a end-of-summer's eve. Loved it. Saw it rec'd on A Different Forest. Made me want to test drive a younger man though ;)
knblas chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Would you ever consider turning this into a chapter story? I loved the story and your characters and I'd be interested in seeing what kind of turbulence, if any, they would hit as a couple.
majose chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
This was awesome!
Lena chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Great chapter, love it!
feja chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
AMAZING - so glad I read this!
HeBelongstoMe chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
This was hilarious, sweet, and so much fun to read.

Thanks for sharing!
ssarrahh chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Very cute little o/s!

thanks for posting.

Whitney Love chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Yummy. Hot and a sweet ending. What more could you want? Loved it.


betsmecullen chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I'm so glad you are a RULE BREAKER! And I'm so ecstatic you're on my AA. I'm gonna be out on the back porch smoking my first cigarette ever and sipping an Amaretto Sour! (12 ounces at least) I agree with Irishyoga, continue this with a chapter of EPOV of the time between their fling and meeting up school and an epi. That would be awesome. Look how many reviews you got for this chapter alone! Anyway, good job. And I hope to see more. ;D Thank you so much, Angel.
Lov.Twii chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
One of the best o/s I've ever read, no lie. You are extremely talented
shecater chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I liked this. Nothin wrong with an older woman teaching a younger man the ways of pleasuring a woman. Go Bella!
tsm0836 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
What a great little story has everything. Especially love the ending. I often think that boys should go to a 'finishing school for sex'. How much of a service to women worldwide to have men that know what they are doing. Bliss. Thank you.
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
OOh he got under my skin too. Im way too old to be obsessed by all of this but loving being a cradle-robbing fanfic slut
noddin chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Loved this story!

Came here through a rec from RobMusement: .
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