|Reviews for The Merman|
| paragod chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Great story nice to see the tables turned... I like Bella sexy confident slightly older.
| Wendyg63 chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Good fic. Yummy Merman
| WingsOfEyeliner chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Looove this! Would you continue it? Can you? Lol i love this Edward and i love that Bella got the script flipped on her. Gonna check your other writing :)
| tarajo23 chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
love it! thanks!
| debslmac chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
:) loved this
| motherbeatrice chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
loved it...yeah, Edward in a speedo, omg!
| TwiFanfictionRecs.com chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
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| Midnight Cougar chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
I really enjoyed this; loved the progression of the story, and "not necessarily a cougar yet" Bella was great! And what a sweet teenager Edward! :)
| evilnat chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Excellent one-shot. I'd love to read more if you ever continued!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Fun, although very OOC
| lurker123 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
This was fun, in a creepy cougar way that I usually don't like. But I liked this, despite the discomfort. Just saying. You should continue it. I think there's definitely more to this story. :-)
| cbzoo chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
great little story
| thaliagrace16 chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
what a fantastic little story! i really really liked it - cute ending and i think it really suited the story; i don't really feel like it needs additional chapters, though i would not mind if you wrote more!
| WonderWoman1993 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
| EdwardsLilLamb chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
I love your story, I'd also love to see part 2 of this story. Hint hint!