Reviews for The Merman
tarajo23 chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
love it! thanks!
debslmac chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
:) loved this
motherbeatrice chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
loved it...yeah, Edward in a speedo, omg!
TwiFanfictionRecs.com chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
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Midnight Cougar chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
I really enjoyed this; loved the progression of the story, and "not necessarily a cougar yet" Bella was great! And what a sweet teenager Edward! :)
evilnat chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Excellent one-shot. I'd love to read more if you ever continued!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Fun, although very OOC
lurker123 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
This was fun, in a creepy cougar way that I usually don't like. But I liked this, despite the discomfort. Just saying. You should continue it. I think there's definitely more to this story. :-)
cbzoo chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
great little story
thaliagrace16 chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
what a fantastic little story! i really really liked it - cute ending and i think it really suited the story; i don't really feel like it needs additional chapters, though i would not mind if you wrote more!
WonderWoman1993 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Great story!
EdwardsLilLamb chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
I love your story, I'd also love to see part 2 of this story. Hint hint!
maxandmo chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
LOVED IT!
DagnyHepburn chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Loved it! Super cute :) Very interesting plot line and EB interaction. Great writing!
fantasylover4evr chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I liked it :D Very nicely done, you could turn this into something more if you wanted
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