Reviews for The Merman
lurker123 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
This was fun, in a creepy cougar way that I usually don't like. But I liked this, despite the discomfort. Just saying. You should continue it. I think there's definitely more to this story. :-)
cbzoo chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
great little story
thaliagrace16 chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
what a fantastic little story! i really really liked it - cute ending and i think it really suited the story; i don't really feel like it needs additional chapters, though i would not mind if you wrote more!
WonderWoman1993 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Great story!
EdwardsLilLamb chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
I love your story, I'd also love to see part 2 of this story. Hint hint!
maxandmo chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
LOVED IT!
DagnyHepburn chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Loved it! Super cute :) Very interesting plot line and EB interaction. Great writing!
fantasylover4evr chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I liked it :D Very nicely done, you could turn this into something more if you wanted
Gaymar21 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Wonderful
FrustratedLawStudent chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Great and lovely and sweet and so on, and so forth ;) I would really, really love to read more about those two...
featherme chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Loved this! I could visualize every detail. Thank you!
tirzofjoylovesbooks chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
I would have liked a more closed ending this left me feeling like "that was it?" But I loved regardless.
zkcej chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Lovely i want more! Lolz

Thanks for the cuteness
xx
Halo221 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Hot hot hot!
dayuuuumgirl chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
awesome!
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