Reviews for The Devil You Know
Sam chapter 35 . 5/29
I absolutely love your story! Very well written and original. Last update I can see was several years ago, so I very much doubt the continuation of this story. But a girl can hope! Would be extremely interested in seeing what comes next for Paul & Bella!
njhs chapter 35 . 5/23
of course i wish this was finished but as far as i’m concerned it can end here! bella and paul are together forever and i love them so much and everyone is safe so 3 thank you so much for sharing this!
The other Goldilocks chapter 35 . 5/23
It’s always a good day when I see that this title is still here. I’m grateful for all the re-reads I’ve gotten throughout the years. Hope is a bitter pill, to see this finished but just getting a taste for your Twilight universe has been such a pleasure. I wish I commented more when you were still writing actively. Still, I’m always thankful for getting to read it again.
BabydollnherTeddybear2011 chapter 35 . 5/23
Hello can you please update soon x
shortfuse28 chapter 35 . 5/11
I'm nothing if not thorough REPOST!(A03) just cause I feel ya need to know! Cause !
Ok, lemme tell you a story...aside from me probably at some point over the last couple years leaving a review over at the other place.
I have reread this probably 5 times over the last few years; and I gotta tell ya..this is probably my very favorite fic. It is so well written and detailed in a way that is very f*$%ing rare; too much description leaves you thinking "dear lord get on with it!" this story absolutely does NOT have that problem.
Mind you..I have read a few thousand and preread for a couple writers.
BUT this has REALLY thrown me through a loop; and I feel context is required...I have this ocd problem with stopping at a certain point and leaving chapters unread until there are a certain number of unread chapters (updates as it were). Yesterday, I was bored and said screw it even though it was 2 short. (Kinda regretting that now cause I'm an impatient person who HAS to know what's next. *insert sad face here*) Onwards..
Anyhooo, the second time rereading, many many moons ago; a friend asked what I had my head in (meaning what am I reading; cause I always have my head in a book or the like). While trying to explain, I had to liken it to a series I absolutely LOVE and have an obsession with. I restart from the very beginning everytime a new book comes out. Wanna take a wild guess?
Years ago I threw this in with the likings of the Harry not Potter! Yes my dears, before I had even GOT to that chapter; I compared you to the Dresden Files. It is THAT good.
Now for the sack of my sanity...please update soon. I know good shit takes time! But maybe just a nugget?... at this point...I'm not to ashamed to pay
AreyouSavvy chapter 35 . 4/29
Hi! Hope all is well. Reread this for like the 5th time. Love your writing and wanted to let you know :D
Solti chapter 35 . 4/26
oh no!it ended too abruptly can you come back please~
Solti chapter 29 . 4/25
gonna be fun when $hit starts rolling *evil laugh*
Kellycuddles1 chapter 33 . 4/21
please, please, please update your story
mamastephie chapter 1 . 3/17
I’ve never written a review before, but I just want to thank you for such a riveting story. Though unfinished, it’s something I find myself coming back to time and time again over the years. I hope you one day finish it as it could be published as a novel that I would 100% buy. Hope life is treating you well.
Shadowsmisery chapter 35 . 2/23
Hope to see more of this story. Hope all is well and that you are doing ok!
EASEmama chapter 35 . 2/12
Every time I reread this story, I'm sucked back in. Even though it's An incomplete story, there is something about it that feels complete and whole to me. This is definitely 1 of my top 5 favorite fan fiction stories, and I love it so so much!
This story is what the Quileute deserved.
Brin chapter 35 . 2/8
Thanks for not removing this title. It has been years and I still enjoy reading your story
CoffeeSmutLover chapter 35 . 2/10
Absolutely brilliant! Well done! Kudos! *Long list of other positive words I'm too lazy to type out*

I was skeptical to start reading this as an uncompleted fic -God forbid, I never do- on my Kindle but I'm ecstatic for kicking the fear and doing so. Your character- and story development were phenomenal. The different perspectives of each character truly made it feel like a published novel. Your extensive vocabulary and descriptions were also a delectable treat.

I fell in love with the character that is Paul and his backstory. I find it fascinating how you could have written such a lengthy fic from a minor character in the novels. It caused me to start cursing SM for not writing a wolf-centered book. Let's not delve into the disaster that was Breaking Dawn. It always irked me how Bella was willing to throw away her life for a vampire and not even give one of the Pack members a chance? Sorry, I don't mean to offend anyone that adores BD. The way SM wrote Jacob also felt OOC so please forgive him, it wasn't his fault!

Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to write this. I'm patiently waiting for you to finish this or at least inform us that the fic is abandoned and up for adoption. The number of ideas I have is close to ridiculous.

A few questions and comments if you will:

Jonah: Given his symptoms and experience of the world, he might be suffering from Schizophrenia. Is he going to be medicated for that? Will the medication even work for shapeshifters? Will he come to terms with what he's dealing with?

Emily: What is she going to do with Sam? Will she ever be content with just him? Why is she suddenly so cold against the pack?

Haven's staff: Given that they're supernaturals how will the rest of the Quileute tribe react if they find out about the bigger picture? Do they have any other special abilities besides what have been mentioned?

Haven: Such an interesting character! What's his backstory? Surely, he must be part feline. Why else his affinity for feline-like staff? He must also be an ancient and powerful supernatural.

Paul & Bella: I'm glad that they had a resolution and Paul finally found someone to tame him. Why did Bella drink some of his blood? Why is Bella seen as someone extra special in the pack? Does she also have some hidden supernatural voodoo that she didn't know about? What about the rest of the pack?

What will Alice and the rest of the Cullens do? Will the Volturi intervene? What about the other more powerful supernaturals?
(Spoilers End!)

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Exactly what I needed at this point of my life.

I couldn't help but imagine Haven as Pagan Min from FC4. He just seems to fit the character perfectly.

This is my first-read review. Obviously, there might have been some details that I missed.
Readermoon12 chapter 35 . 2/5
Please update when you can. I love the direction of this story.
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