Man I bet that little shit so wishes he would have kept his mouth shut. HE is so wrong on so many levels, she is a virgin for god's sake. Got to admit tho he has balls but only because he thought he could run his mouth and then run and hide...

WOW

Well what did he expect she was only able to be so forgiving, he was becoming an uncontrolled ass..

Holy shit his mom is messed up drunk or not that is just messed up, man the suspense if killing me...

Jake had better get down on his knees and thank Bella cause she just saved him from getting his ass handed to him on a platter man he really needs to grow up.. So what is with Paul are you ever gonna tell us, it is really interesting how he can do all that

God this is so good, I am so confused as to if she is his mate or just a friend but it is so good... I love it. Jake needs a reality check he is an ass...

Loved the chapter. Oh that Ellie is a piece of work. I like little Matt, he's a brave kid. Yes, they kissed, but than I got confused and was like did he kiss her just to mock Casey or was it more to it? Did he mean the kiss couldn't happen again or that she shouldn't interfere again? Can't wait to read more, I hope Bella puts Ellie in her place.

Ohh finally! More soon please :)

Ah they kissed! So excited.. Im loving this story

Yay!

Wow, I actually like your Renee. Of couse in cannon she not much more than a flighty shadow, so much more human here.

absolutely loved this chappy...loved the water balloon fight, just picturing a wet paul(YUM)...loved the kiss between b&p, small n innocent like but steamy at the same time(YUM)...love how just a simple gesture like holding her hand lets her know everything is ok between them n back on track...casey was so lucky bella stepped in when she did cuz otherwise paul was gonna beat him down(n so deserved)...ellie is gonna need a public humiliating to get it thru her head that paul is not interested...I suspect bella will reach her limit n blow up on her n paul backs her up, in front of the entire family, n everyone will agree...gramps seriously needs to lighten up n follow gramma's leed, so glad rennee stepped up n told him like it is...btw tx so much for the update

Dude they should just hurry up and go at it like rabbits. Lol.

Love it, more,please more!

Great scene. Are you planning to do a POV of Paul? I'm assuming they are mates but Paul's views aren't very clear