Reviews for The Devil You Know |
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BW-Photography chapter 2 . 9/16/2011 Love love love love! Ahhhhhhhhhh I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is SO GOOD! |
johnnycakewasgolden chapter 2 . 9/16/2011 Paul Lahote is just that damn sexy! geez Bella you've always sucked at lying. I'm guessing Paul knew you were lying and that he effected you so much. |
Iamtwilightobsessed-MP chapter 2 . 9/16/2011 This is the best thing I've read in a long time, your description of Paul is what my "dream" Paul is. Kudos. You actually made my out of shape, post 18 year old self want to do a cartwheel when I finished reading this, and let me tell you I do not do cartwheels. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Noini chapter 2 . 9/16/2011 holy mother of God i need to lie down and have a cigarette after that Paul... mmmmmm. gotta go and uncurl my toes, cant wait for the next chapter. |
o-Marta-o chapter 2 . 9/16/2011 hey :) I love the way you write, thougt it may be quite heavy it's easy to get sucken in :) I love Paul and your Paul is going to be interesting for sure, the Sam/Bella imprint saunds cool so I would be interested in reading more of this fic. The problem is that u gived us 2 chapters (awsome chapters, by the way) but they are of the same day still, so I'm guesing this fic may get quite long and it took you very fraking long to update... (more then 2 months) so if we will have to wait that long for update it will make it hard to follow- not only becouse we would need to reread previous chapters to remember what went down, but also becouse I'm not overly pentient person... So meybe you could write one chapter ahead and wait in updating what u have till u a least start next chapter- so in the futore the wait would be not so long. I don't know... Anyhow... I love this fic so far and hope it will go smoothly for you from heare :) |
o-Marta-o chapter 1 . 8/26/2011 I hope you plan on adding some more chapters to ths story, becouse I love it :) |
BW-Photography chapter 1 . 8/15/2011 FANTASTIC start to Paul/Bella story. LOVE it. I think you've got a good thing going on here - please continue! |
lxonssa chapter 1 . 8/3/2011 wow... great first chapter. Your story looks promising if the rest are like it. Can't wait for next update |
katyaleighb chapter 1 . 7/30/2011 SO, I've decided that I want my Paul/Bella to be your Paul/Bella when it grows up. Just the descriptive words in your story alone are just vicious. |
GrazySF chapter 1 . 7/30/2011 ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... moreeee...pleaseeeeeeeeee |
goose14226 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011 Best first ch our a story ever!i can not wait for more! Sarah |
Oridara chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 Wow. And I mean I am wowed and needing an update as soon as possible on your time, Miss. Ma'm. AMAZING hook. -You were warned this might happen," the big man stated quietly as he drove through the intersection, his face carefully blank as he kept his eyes on the road before him. "You were told not to push it too far."- I can just imagine how many things one can read into this. Yeah, I thought Jacob was beautiful, but I am more into the Paul/Embry and if I am burnin'hot I get into Emmett and lil bit of Jasper. I own "New Moon" on DVD but that's it. I will never read Twilight because I know it will not measure up to what you have here, "The Devil You Know", killer title, you know how to market your writing and you do it well. Must tell me what you read that is non-Twi. Your Paul is so damn sexy, every single word drippping with honey and molasses that comes out his mouth. Goodness and Greatness;so well-written that I forgot that this was , I had one of those "Can't believe it's not Butter" moments. Update as soon as you see what you produce is fit. Don't want to rush a good thing. Excellent. |
Cal685 chapter 1 . 7/19/2011 I am very excited to see where you take this story! Great starting chapter! |
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 7/17/2011 Wow, this story is kick-ass so far and I am excited to see where you are going with this. Gotta love a dangerous, sexy werewolf! |
Louise M Frost chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 I also love Paul fics, thanks |