wish you could finish the epilogue.

lovely story though.

thanks for sharing

-stz

I enjoyed this. Such a sweet story. The end was a bit off for me tho. Just left it leading to more. Like another chapter is planned or something. Oh well. Also, I don't know why you edited it down. I have read far, far, far more spicy lemons and violent stories here on that have an M rating. If anything, with the exception of the epilogue, id rate this under T for minor violence and sexual innuendo's. Other than that. Great story. Well done.

Much love,
Ashlie Christine

ALMOST forgot, but had to comment: loved the jaime twist ! that's was bloody brilliant

this was good. a bit repetitive when we got to Edward's pov. i skipped most of it, tbh. but the plot was amazing and very well-thought. the whole bella portraying a minor is insane, but it makes a bit more sense when you explain that she ended there because of emm's connection to it all. still, i think it is a bit cruel to make a 23 years old portray a 17 - still in school - kid. you take their freedom away by doing that. and that's what happened.

i had a great time. this was different from most of the bella in protective custody stories i've read so far. which is amazing. it is a shame this is not finished. i picked a habit of always checking if the stories i am reading have epilogues, because then it means they are complete. surprise me this had and epilogue but was not finished. i hope you come back to it some day (maybe in 5 years? 2023 is coming soon hahaha)

thanks for sharing

i was really enjoying this and then i was getting a bit worried about the pedophile thing (from edward's perspective, of course). i'm glad they sorted the age thing out before they kissed or anything

Where is the rest of the story.

OK, this was an incredibly sexy love scene! WOW! Now what will happen to them? I'm afraid to know!

I feel he's really taken in by her. Couldn't she at least tell him how old she really is? Guess not...but it's normal for her to fall for a kind, handsome man like Edward!

Very interesting start! Does Edward still live with the Cullens, or does he have his own home? Guess I'll find out soon...

great story :)

thank you for sharing your words

So good. Can't wait for more

Oh I was hoping this was completed ...

Hope you will have time to finish this story

Take care

Such a great story! Please finish it! Dying to know if Esme and Emmett get to meet Charlie

I really enjoyed your novel. great idea with making Bella pretend to be 17 again and go through high school for the second time.
thank you for sharing your work for free. don't pay any mind to the rude "guests" who come for a visit, eat the food, drink the wine and in exchange insult the host. they are not worth your attention.
I hope you will keep writing. you are really good at it.
stay warm and safe xxx

great start