Reviews for At First
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10
So beautifully written and in i know tentoo and the doctor are very the same and he would never hurt still upset he married River and moved on,i guess we should be happy for him like Rose would,but at least i know he will never love anyone the same way as his Rose :):):)
eternalLove59 chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
This was brilliant! I love reading Rose and Tentoo stories where their relationship or lack of is a struggle at first but then they overcome it little by little.
Rhymia chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
This almost made me cry. Great work.
FanAficionada chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
This is so angsty but lovely and wonderful. I like that you portrayed Rose's emotional struggle to love the duplicate doctor because even if they are the same, they are not. I also loved her reaction to the doctor's death showing how she has let go of him and moved on.
FlyingLovegood123 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I think this IS how their relsionship would have gone. It's brilliant, sad, and joyful all at the same time. Because no matter what, Rose loves the Doctor. Always. Thank you for writing!
Capitola chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I really liked this, because a lot of Rose/10.5 fics have them getting along right off the bat, but this dealt more with emotional struggles. You also have a really strong voice.
jenneticdisorder chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
This is seriously the best Doctor Who fanfic I've ever read. Your writing is excellent and the entire thing overall is perfect.
Sweet Ginger Snap chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Oh my gosh! This is so sweet. I love it!
iMissHP chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
This is beautiful! I loved it. Your Rose is complex and interesting, very pleasant to read. You wrote her evolution perfectly and the Doctor! He is brilliant. They are perfect.

I loved the ending and how you mentioned 11th's apparition. It's an amazing story. The flow is perfect.

St. Aelphaba chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Beautifully written. Very realistic. Well done.
impalathief67 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This was really, really very good.

Your story is making me laugh and cry at the same time. I have to say, I like 10.5 a lot more now.

Lovely story,

MistyWolfe chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Oh, so beautiful! And you made it feel so real. I can see this happening. Thanks so much! Excellent job!
Bekki chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
this was completely captivating and beautiful! Very believable, with perfect pace. Thank you so much for sharing :-)
Your Favourite Oxymoron chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
This is lovely.