|Reviews for Don't Touch The Water|
| Girl chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
That stupid Kraken... That stupid INVISIBLE Kraken...I remember throwing a piece of dead flesh into the water, then listening to it CRUNCH away at it. Then because it was frukking invisible, when I went to jump off of teh box to run across to the other side, I landed straight on top of it and died... That stupid splashy Kraken...
I love your story. Thank you for writing it.
| Frostfyre chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Oh God I still remember screaming when that thing first hit.
| The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Completely. Relate. Also, very nice job, your wording was great and terror-inducing. Favorite part is when you mention the "shpsh" is his shaking. :)
| Wolfstorm7 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Same. Exact. Feeling.
I didn't realize that the surgical needle was to pick the lock at first, and went back through the throw-the-body-parts room a few times looking for a key.
And I like your splashy sounds :)
| BoredOfHerHead chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
THIS IS AMAZING. Amazingly written, like poetry (Though, I think it actually is... Right? XD)
I always feel kinda bad for Daniel...
Anyway, great job!