|Reviews for The Edge of Death|
| Jewels chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Nice! Ditto to all of the reviews below. I really liked how you were able to explain Cozarts last moments of thoughts with the cliff scene :)
| theramenfreak chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I love this! It's so well written, I can picture everything that's happening :D
| EK12 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Face at start :
Face at end :)
touching story, I must say. It reaches into one's heart and make one happy.
| chocoluvr15 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I love how you expanded on Cozart's thoughts :)
I also love the last part. It has great impact!
"The Sky smiles upon the Earth.
They exchange glances, laughter ringing through the air.
They battle their way through furious tempests,
They battle their way through furious quakes,
In each other, they never hesitate to confide,
Their lives, of truth, and of lies,
And of their
You are a very talented person. :)Keep up the great work!
| Prince SuperSharky chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Haha Not bad. I like how you expanded on what Cozart's head.
Though, a lot of it was copied from the manga. Not bad for your first fic. I would suggest adding a lot more detail especially if you're going to take lines from canon-to make it more interesting for the reader, or else it'll just be like reading the manga all over again.
Yeah, but like I said, not bad for a first fic. Keep writing!