Reviews for When the sun stops burning me inside
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
so very very beautiful. I would pay for an entire book filled with such pretty prose - it's lovely and bitter, hinted at wistful sweet - perfect for everything that is peter pan & wendy and the promise of never never land.
seasaltsails chapter 1 . 3/13/2016
poetic beauty.
whatdotheydream chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
AAAAAAAAAH! So cute, and sad, and cute, and AAAAAAAAAH!
great gospel chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
You just about killed me. I'm read to go sob in a corner now. I love your prose, and it obviously hit home. Well done.
PinkWhalePJs chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Okay you're officially a favorite now!
Amanthya chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
The original story is actually depressing that way, but you make it very pretty here, not quite sad, never really over. : )
l0ngl0st chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Oh, I love it - it's so beautiful and lyrical. But so tragic. :(
paper piper chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
This is why Peter Pan is actually a sad story. Beautiful.
waterbender-inlalaland chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Beautiful. The only thing I can say.