|Reviews for Nothing Unusual|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
great fan fic catnip cant get over daxter and your right about ttorn and ashelins relationship. It is very subtle and the woman has more power great job3
| Illaeshin chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Okay. I give. This was adorable. I've always thought that Torn and Ashelin's relationship was adorable and wonderfully on ice throughout the games, but this just made me smile. Jak is all out of his mind with Keira, and now Torn can be too with Ashelin! About time!
Well done. I really enjoyed reading this.
| Tatiana chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
I think this story was amazing. I've been waiting for a long time to find a really good Torn/Ashelin story. Those two really should've been together (maybe they were and were really subtle about it, I don't know). I think it'd be great if you wrote more :)
| Krimson taint chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I really love the Torn/Ashelin pairing (they seriously need more love)
And you wrote this really well :D
| SunnyDee13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
AWWW! That was cool :)
I like how you did a Torn X Ashelin story. You did a great job :)
(Spaz attack warning)
YOU HAVE TO GET JAK 3! It's freaking amazing! You NEED to play it! Go out and buy it RIGHT NOW!
Sorry for that, But you really should get Jak 3. It's awesome. I'v played through it over a dozen times and it's always fun :)