|Reviews for USS Chimera or USS Puppy?|
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 6 . 4/30
Very good, I really enjoy creature fics, and people underestimate Tim waaaaayyyy too often! Nice work!
| velcrogg chapter 6 . 1/12
I hope you decide to finish this! I was really enjoying it. I don't know how I missed it! I'd love to know how it ends! Please!
| RedDragen chapter 6 . 8/7/2016
I hope one day you would up date this story
| KaiaRenkin chapter 6 . 1/27/2016
| Crawcolady chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
I see that you have been posting up until June of 2013. I have a question for you. You adopted this story, are you planning on finishing it? It is much to good of a story to just let it remain one of the many unfinished sagas on this site. Please, if you aren't planning on finishing it, would you consider adopting it out to someone who would? Please let me know! Thank you!
| Duke83 chapter 6 . 1/14/2013
| Cissa-Lycoris-Black chapter 6 . 1/9/2013
This is great! Update soon!
| BubbaWolf30 chapter 6 . 7/24/2012
good job with the fight scenes. really believable. keep going
| shadowdweller25 chapter 5 . 10/7/2011
Please update soon!
| Jessie Rose 911 chapter 6 . 9/27/2011
have i told you how much i love you? lol! i really like where you've taken the story! Continue!
| HorseRidersHaveMoreFun chapter 6 . 9/1/2011
I like the story, but please get a beta reader. You have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes that start to detract from it after a while.
For example, instead of 'as he cached his trail ' it should be 'as soon as he caught his trail'.
Cached is a word mainly associated with computer information or hiding something so that you can come back later to find it. 'Caught' is the past tense form of 'catch', which is what I think you were trying to use.
Small stuff like this, added up over time, can really drag an another really good story down... and Never apologize for not being able to write something like a fight scene. There's not really a need for it if you can get the same feeling for what happened by describing the after effects of the fight.
| shadowdweller25 chapter 6 . 9/1/2011
More! Must have more.
| beverlie4055 chapter 6 . 9/1/2011
love the chapter
| Depresnajk chapter 6 . 9/1/2011
That was great! Please continue soon!
| Gottahavemyncis chapter 6 . 8/31/2011
Tim saves the day, whoohooo! And I know he'll be alright because he's FINALLY getting a mate. Looking forward to the rest of this!