Reviews for The Devil's Story
ZekiWing chapter 1 . 8/16
I lose, you've won with the freaking twist at the end. I only hesitated for a second when I read the name Albus. I even mentally remarked in my head about how if Dumbledore was still alive he should have at least named his son Severus Albus Potter. But I never even questioned that the person he was talking to was Dumbledore, then I had to reread it. You've won his time, Faust.
BlackRyuji chapter 1 . 6/12
Lunaliceazreal chapter 1 . 5/8
arryotter chapter 1 . 4/7
i did not see that twist coming. well done.
gbakermatson chapter 1 . 3/29
Sandra Fiore chapter 1 . 2/16
Nice twists and turns, a very well written story, congratulations.
agent2811 chapter 1 . 1/15
That plot twist screwed with my mind
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Good heavens. That was quite the shocking story- and well-written at that. Well done, I say!
rv67r9 chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
oh my geezers that plot twist made my heart bounce out of my chest
FangirlAlertWatchOut chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
Shit. I wasn't expecting that. Wow. You really had me going for a long time there... I can't even. Wow. Just wow.
Diana de Ailf MDI chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
Me has helado al hueso. Tomaste alguna inspiración de xxxHolic? Porque al comienzo (y si debo reconocerlo, durante todo el fic) Harry tenía un aire inconfundible de ser el dueño de la tienda. La historia ha sido impresionante 0.0 Y el toque de Albus, ser Albus Severus y de Teddy ser su amante... Sin palabras. Y toda la habitación y la locura de Harry, le daban un aire inexplicable de horror al fic. Bravo. Has creado una obra maestra en el género.
madfox01 chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Woah... that was an unexpected plot twist at the end.I love it.
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
Update do something please
aalens chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
That was very different. I liked it a lot.
Lucinda Silver chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
Well damn, I thought he was Dumbledore until the end and I paused when I saw James and I thought that maybe Harry's only parent is silly alive but then I saw the middle name 'Sirius'. I was temporarily suspicious, but I let it go and I was staring at the "Album Severus Pitter" dumbstruck. Good job, author, you have just fooled me, even if that's is not your intention. I probably should have realize it wasn't Album when he didn't say "Harry, my boy," even once.
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