damn. should have been a harem fic. thats part of why i read so far.

i hope this is a harem story. I just love the idea of him getting multiple loves. Especially when he is taking people from Pedomaru. Kin in particular.

Goddamn, why must every FUCKING author try to force NaruHina ship? it never worked in canon so why would it work in this AU where Naruto leaves konoha for the Uzumaki? Hinata is a bland sheet of paper she's the definition of pancakes with no syrup the bitch is just bland and is the Hyuga really okay with letting not just one of their own and to add the FUCKING heiress leave like that? c'mon. By that context Hanabi is a much better person for naruto than simpy Hinata in canon there was no recorded rogue Hyuga. Rogue Uchiha i can understand not the heiresses to the clan of assholes. Good concept, bad execution, bad and frankly illogical ship worse of all Hiruzen's character 'nuff said.

Eu queria saber se Tsunade vai aparecer na história como uma das pessoas de Konoha que gosta de Naruto é que fará qualquer coisa para protegê-lo ou. ela vai ser com aqueles bastardos do conselho que só que prejudicar como uma das pessoas que achava que Naruto estava morto e vai ficar furiosa com o conselho e o Hokage.

OK, I read the next chapter. This is an acceptable way to go around my main complaint from my previous reveiw. I wont say what happened, as to not spoil it for people reading reveiws before the story (Why are you like this though? just read the story xD) but I still argue that Naruto had no way of eeing this coming, but at least it makes more sense from the Clans perspective of why they are willing to allow it.

Imma be honest... I knew Naruto would eventually go back to the leaf, but even so, it's SUCH a bad ide/story-beat. he is not only going to willingly go back to the place where he was violently abused, but he is going to go SERVE the same people who beat and betrayed him? How would he ever trust ANY of them, ESPECIALLY the Hokage?

Hiruzen willfully hid his heritage, knowing full well that he had a living family that could protect him. I know you said you didn't want to make Hiruzen evil n this, but that's the definition of evil. And his excuse of "I was trying to keep im safe like minato asked." is absolute BS. He kept him from the only family he had, stopped anyone who cared for him from adopting him, and KNEW that he was being abused daily... but at no point in FIVE YEARS did he think that this wasn't protecting Naruto AT All?

And what was Hiruzens BRILLIANT plan for when Naruto gets older? For when he gets powerful? Did he think the Uzumaki Clan wouldn't look into a boy about the right age to be Kushina's kid who has the last name Uzumaki? That they wouldn't go to war for keeping him for all those years? Did he think Naruto would somehow take the Leafs side after finding out he had been lied too his whole life? Or was Hiruzen just going to purpospurposefully stunt Naruto "for the good of the village"?

Tbc I'm still going to keep reading, and overall I do ike the story, I just think that as a plot point, this decision makes no sence.

One of the best fics I've read. Sad that it's unfinished.

Looks like my man is die. Bro said only death will make him stop writing

beautiful naruto kenshin and bleach crossover i like it... genryusai yamomoto from bleach and kenshin himura and takami thats a dam good setup

i hear uzumaki wardrums afoot...

good author i hate to nitpick ...but the if only barley... the word your looking for is barely. again sorry to nitpick its my dislexia acting up hope you have many good stories like im sure this one is wasnt tryin to nitpick as i said. and hope you have many more stories to write thanks

the story I'd great. keep up the good work.

but...
what about Tsunade, I doubt whirlpool would let their kin go so easily.

It seems you're still around but not finishing up your story after all these years. Why is it the interesting stories never finished?

Okay so here i am at chapter 16 I haven't finished this chapter I just wanted to leave my review overall this kinda good. I like the idea and it definitely had its exciting points but. The sasuke bashing is a bit much even if he wanted hinata no way I hell would he act like that sasuke isn't stupid. Honestly I only read this cuz I couldn't find anything else there were a lot stuff I felt was weird and un explained about his so called clan arts and a lot of op naruto I also hated the fact that haku is a girl it just feels like ts set up to be a love triangle

well this was a fun read I hope to see you update again at some point