Reviews for Elevator
redcherryamber chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
A really interesting story. I liked your characterisation of Shera.

"Being a hero was something that would suit Cid, at least judging by the action movies that the other watched while she was working". That's a subtle way to sum up their relationship at this time.

"Don't mention it Shera. Don't ever mention it." Great lines!

I loved the whole atmosphere of this, and the sense of menace that you built up around the Turks.
Licoriceallsorts chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Nice story - great sense of atmosphere, and a believable snapshot of the Turks at work. Poor Shera; she was pretty brave, even if she thinks she wasn't.
SHA260 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
You did a fantastic job of this whole thing. I love it so much.