Reviews for Midnight Conversation
Canadiagirl chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
Well, I've never thought in depth about character relations in the bad future, but I do ship Aoi and Bullet rather hard, and I'd say you did a good job. One personal note: What happened to Tim? I like Tim a lot and his absence was conspicuous since him and Bullet are so close. You say something about "when Tim was still around" and I was just like oh no what happened to my Timmy. Okay I'm getting rambly and fangirly I'll just leave off now.
yiyi14 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
i'm confused. you sortta losted the story after.
altrilast13 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
i like the story..i was kinda assuming it would be a romantic story since you describe the scenery and the title to be like aoi x bullet story..but since your story caught my eye...i thought of making an aoi x bullet's your story that made me thought of a new story... thanks for making this story
Mereo Flere chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
It's nice. I like it, seeing some Bullet/Aoi. I've been rooting for that pairing ever since the camping trip, to be honest.

It was a nice conversation too, and seeing all of the little things like family and the effects each of them individually leaving would do was nice.

Of course, though it's labelled as complete, it feels like the setup to something even more interesting.
Lily of the Valli chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I love the atmosphere in your story. Middle of the night, peace, Aoi and Bullet disussing what happened and will happen. But we get to know that they have to hurry, as Babel is on their tail.

I think you kept them both in character, just matured due to battles and time that passed. I can totally image Aoi as computer science major, with her grades. Their relation seems natural and somehow sweet. They belong together

Bad future is something we are left ill-informed in manga. Your speculations may be right. Other thing I like in this fic, is it seems that nothing happened suddenly. Children left Babel one by one for their own reasons, Babel and society itself changed by time, becoming esper-unfriendly.

"I want to see the Queen," This words hold the most power. They seals fate of The Children and the world.

I would like to see this fix expanded. To see whole process before and what happens after this last words.

There is one thing I'm not sure about. Aoi's power seems too great. In manga even level 7 esper couldn't teleport on so big distance.