Reviews for Just A Kid
RoadMart chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
D'aww, very cute. I like the little "like their mother used to do" bits; makes everything more sentimental. Nice little fic. c:
Luxuria De'Voire chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I've read a lot of stories about Lightning and Serah when they went through this horrible experience, but I have never been so moved and touched as I am now reading this one. You have an amazing amount of talent in bringing the emotion out of the words you write, and it shows when the reader feels like they're watching someone else's life. I honestly felt like I was looking down on these two sister's lives, and I could vividly hear their voices speaking these exact same words.

Thank god I read this-because my perspective for these two loving, everbound sisters has just changed entirely :)
Lescachan chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Just love it!

That was and still is one of my favourite stories of yours _

I just really like the way how Lightning is taking care of Sarah like a second mom (had to smile at the cooking scene, cause I can totally imagine that cooking is not exactly Lights favourite thing to do. lol)

Please, more of that ;-)