|Reviews for Observation & Engineering|
| theluckyshot chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Damn good story, hope to see more in the future. Looking forward to the future pieces. Keep it up!
| Wiggs Magee chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
A very nice short story. I'll read any others you post.
| smashbrawlguy chapter 2 . 7/11/2011
A little short, but okay. I liked the bit with Kaidan and Ash at the end.
| SergiusTheGreat chapter 2 . 7/11/2011
Heh Shepard is a pimp "Checking up on the new girl."
Would like to see some more one shots from you with Shep/Tali, except that you should add some romance and comedy eh? Think your up for it? I duly think so!
Good Luck and great job!
| sqbr chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I liked this, very plausible inner monologue for Tali and I'm curious to see what happens next :)
| lanwut chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I adore how awkward both your Tali and Shep are. ManShep always strikes me as being a bit full of himself (idek), so it was nice to see him fumbling a bit.
I look forward to seeing the other part to this.
| Penseln chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Well written and fun to read story. The characters feels alive and i hope to get to learn with future chapters.
| NucaCola chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Wow this is diffrent, I like it. Please continue soon!
| smashbrawlguy chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
It's not what I'm used to seeing, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. I didn't see any typos; that's pretty impressive nowadays.
When the next chapter comes out, I'll be there.
| Randomencounter chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Not too shabby, not a fan of present tense writing but this was too damn good to nitpick over! Can't wait to see some more from you perhaps expand into full story writing :)