Reviews for The Only One in a Mask
ShadowWriter33 chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
Brilliant! I'm not much for such short stories, but this one packs a punch. Love the last sentence.
FlowerPrincessoftheUniverse chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
Nice work!
The stars stare coldly down chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
This story is wonderful. It's so good, I just want to give you a potted plant.

Not a plastic one though.
Elaine du Lac chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Love! Love, love th is story!
Polinkaa chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Great story. Thank you
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
This is fine without the background-it leaves the scene to your imagination.

I enjoyed this! Thanks!
Mireilles3 chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Wow! That was soooooo perfect :) kuddos!
Atticot chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Wow, I can't get over how amazingly brilliant this piece is. Makes me want to cry ;D I love stories where the protagonist pretends to be some stupid ditz. It's just so hilarious, people's reactions, when the mask comes off and the facade dwindles :D I really love your writing style and the point where Gordon comes to realization and he's like 'duh, it was so painfully obvious'... The transaction was brilliant :D
Istielrin chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Loved it! Would love to read more !
yay chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
His transition from stunned disbelief to facepalming-obviousness is really nicely done.
Sailor nova 1 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
This is a great one shot! I just love the last line! Makes it perfect!
Sanna Black Slytherin chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
A good fic. The only issue I see is, does Bruce know that Jim knows?
TeraWatt chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I love the semi-ongoing joke about Batman disappearing mid-sentence.
"So that's what that feels like."[Dark Knight Rises - Batman after Catwoman disappears mid-sentence]
Typical indeed.
Nice story

Individual Narrative chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Oooh, all the maskyness made me tingly. I like how you made Gordon react to the situation. The poor guy has to react to all sorts of unexpected things being pelted his way. He should get a raise.
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Loved this.
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