|Reviews for Ghosts of Kings Cross|
| MermaidGirl34 chapter 11 . 12/10/2011
I like it a lot. I read the first chapter of the rewrite too and I like it even better than the first chapter of this one. Your idea is amazing and has merit but I think you need to slow down a little. Take your time with your writing. Be descriptive and explain everything that is happening in detail and describe Harry's feelings and conflictions more in depth. It makes chapters longer which readers like, gives it more sophisication and prevents the story from feeling too rushed which I feel a little bit now with this because the chapters are short and you don't go into much detail. If you fix that it will be amazing. The descriptions you already have in here are good which proves that you can describe well all you need to do is describe more and do it more in depth. Other than that it is a great story I absolutely love the plot. I am not big on Hermione x Harry which is what you seem to be leaning towards but its tolerable. I would like to know more about how this whole Ressurection Stone thing works and why Sirius can be there and why Harry could go to the castle at first and now he can't. It is an interesting idea/concept and I would like to read the reasoning behind. Don't give up on it! It's a very good story it just needs a little work. I am not trying to be harsh only constructive. As I said I like it I just think it needs work. I also think if you do what I suggested you'll rake in more reviews. No guarentees but I think it will help. I will read it regardless though that I can promise. :) So don't give up hope! And thanks for your review to Without Him! Great minds think alike eh?
| InuyashaPrincess14 chapter 9 . 8/13/2011
It appears this story is a month old. I hope you write more. You left off at such a crucial spot. I have to know if Hermione is going to be miraculously saved or if she'll be killed by Voldemort.
| Sin Maxwell and Co chapter 6 . 7/28/2011
I still enjoy this story. :) Keep up the good work!
| Gola chapter 9 . 7/17/2011
This is a review! This is a REVIEW! I NEED the next chapter! PPPPPPPLLLLLLLZZZZZZ! Loving the story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. XD Great work!
| DarkFlameInfernal chapter 6 . 7/13/2011
f u voldemort
| xXxrouxXx chapter 6 . 7/13/2011
So Harry's ghost did snap back to the body? Wooo! :D
| endlessvamp chapter 6 . 7/13/2011
This is very interesting. :) How will Harry kill Voldemort now that he's a corpse? Can't wait for more.
| xXxrouxXx chapter 5 . 7/12/2011
:O DON'T MAKE HERMIONIE DIE!:'( I will cry *sniff sniff* Love this story idea, by the way, never seen it before and it's very interesting :D
| Paradox Tremors chapter 3 . 7/10/2011
Cursed to watch, Harry is in Hell. Not good. Hopefully he can cause the distraction and Hermoine can kill the snake and it'll be all over. Keep up the great story my friend.
| Paradox Tremors chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
At least Hermoine heard Harry-whatever good that will be. Kill the snake and Voldemort will fall, simple, right! Nothing is as ever simple as it sounds. Another good chapter my friend.
| Paradox Tremors chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Oooops ... Harry, you missed the train. Different and stunning to say the least. Will there be more?
| jazzybizzle chapter 2 . 7/9/2011
This is amazing. Good job so far. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
| Passerby21 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
So thats it? Isnt there supposed to be more to the story?