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SERSMOKE chapter 1 . 18h
good job respectful representation
arhanmohamed17 chapter 3 . 2/7
for some reason I cant seem to finish reading chapter 3?
loleo chapter 39 . 1/23
I would have liked to read a small epilogue about Yusuke finding his bride. and perhaps Neville married to someone and Hermione maybe a married woman or a spinster...
arhanmohamed17 chapter 1 . 1/7
mate you said that the japanese words would be Italian or something
KimberlyJho-ann chapter 8 . 12/20/2023
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KimberlyJho-ann chapter 4 . 12/20/2023
this is good 3 ... the Japanese is killing me tho. I'll endure it for lore.
KimberlyJho-ann chapter 1 . 12/20/2023
.,...ノД)ノ彡(Д)彡(ノ)ノ ミ (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡(ರರ
KimberlyJho-ann chapter 1 . 12/20/2023
ngl sounds cringy... just the explanation. I do believe in read first and judge after. so let's read
Guest chapter 5 . 11/6/2023
It's actually a lot closer to yoos-keh than yoos-kay, but definitely not key.

In Japanese the letter "e" has the hard "a" sound like in the English words "hay" or "hey" but it has a short diphthong which sounds more like "eh" than "ay"

For example, the word matte
" stop, wait, I give up (when submitting to a choke or joint lock)"

Is pronounced "ma-teh" with just the hint of a diphthong creating an elongated diphthong like "ay" is considered bad pronunciation
maiqsmail chapter 8 . 6/28/2023
It seems you are mistaking banishing and vanishing spells. First is to forcefully repel something away, second is magically make something disappear somewhere.
Regarding timings, it's AU? Okay, twins are doing 7.2 year because they failed the first try. Ginny says she was given the diary on her first year, but is it her first year or it was there since the first and she's now at her fifth? And, is it The Diary at all? Luci had no reason to get rid of it if Voldi got resurrected already.
And did TriWizard Tournament even happened? I actually half expected for Harry to be summoned from Japan by him getting enrolled by the Goblet of Fire.
On the side note, we need fanfics where people are forced to compete in the tournament. I'm thinking Fudge, some Death Eaters or Dumbdumb.
maiqsmail chapter 7 . 6/28/2023
I don't get it. Neville is underaged and so cannot claim lordship. Dowager Augusta Longbottom handles all Longbottom affairs as a regent until the boy takes up lordship. Neville's uncle is helping her because she trusts him and delegated summer matters to him.
How and why Uncle's death changes the Neville's status? His gran is still regent and he's still underaged. Uncle couldn't be a Lord Longbottom in any way to hold up (and then pass up) lordship to the heir because he's from different line and didn't marry into it.
What did I miss?
maiqsmail chapter 5 . 6/28/2023
Madlad waited five full chapters to explain how do I pronounce the protagonist's name. And I was pronouncing it incorrectly for five full chapters. Crazy.
maiqsmail chapter 4 . 6/28/2023
Damn you kept me sweating. First I thought how you would cram everything until he's 11, then how Dumbdumb would kidnap him into Hogwarts, then whether he will go into Hogwarts at all or Voldi would have to visit Japan. Very interesting start. I'm curious as to how he will acclimate into Western boarding school. I cannot help but get that crazy idea that he will have entourage of some creatures since humans aren't allowed. Entourage of house elves and goblins would be hilarious, even if I'm not sure if it will fit the story.
maiqsmail chapter 3 . 6/28/2023
This is a quote interesting take. Fascinating, even. Nice exposition on culture (yes, I know it's fiction). But it's interesting to see the rigid system they have with all the nuances of relationships and manners.
maiqsmail chapter 1 . 6/28/2023
Hahaha, I love fanfics. I'm sadly not a degenerate otaku anime fanboy, but this is pretty funny. Add long as I manage to go through all the transliterated Japanese words. I know only around a dozen of them including arigato and kawaii.
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