I enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing. W.

I know this story is fairly old, but I enjoy it immensely. One minor thing, in the section with the picnic when the brooms are following Harry and Ginny, there is an unfinished sentence

"They strolled hand in hand to the lake, with the Wishing Star tagging behind like an obedient puppy. Harry noticed that three "

What's the end of it please?

you might want to go through the story again. I noticed few times some of your sentences didn't finish totally. here is an example.

"They strolled hand in hand to the lake, with the Wishing Star tagging behind like an obedient puppy. Harry noticed that three"

Good luck and and I hope you continue to write.

lol

Wow, this story was so amazing! All the ideas rocked, and I was totally engrossed.

Fantastic job and keep up the fabulous work!

~K

Great story, really.

You mixed up Nevil's mum' name. it's Alice, not Anne

Alright, at first I got a good laugh out of this, which turned in to a chuckle, and then less. It became full of superfluous details and nearly no action. Also, the vocabulary of some of the characters is far too large for someone of 14 or 15. Furthermore, the jokes, wit, and bisexual innuendo in some chapters is very out of character in my humble opinion. I liked it to start, it was great. But it just seemed forced toward the end. Forced and boring.

I am SO glad you posted here, too! I was in the middle of reading this at Sugar Quill and the site just DIED on me! I didn't really want to sign up there anyway, and I *did* want to say I am really enjoying hearing a bit from the Grangers, and am looking forward to seeing the Bulgaria trip, too! I'll bet Krum *does* behave like a slimy git!

Would Hypatia be the sphinx? Oh, and btw, this chapter was a very Twin thing to do. I love you.

Gnomes talk?

This chapter was really funny! I liked the part about the cloaks and spindles to kidnap men and women to force them into arranged marriages. THe phrase /She probably knew the names, life history and genealogy of all the professors, with the possible exception of Snape (who was obviously created in a mad scientist’s lab out of spare parts and axel grease instead of being born to actual human parents./ was really funny too.

The prank calls were really funny! I also like how you developed Hermione's parents

This has got to be the funniest chapter that I have ever read that did not include excessive randomness. The robes were sort of random, but as you gave an explanation...

I loved the Snape/McGonagall dressing-down.

“Madam Gretchen said they were the perfect color for your complexion,” George said.

“Well, for our complexion,” Fred amended. “But yours is the same as ours. So they should look good on you.”

Can't you just picture one of the twins holding up a frilly pair of hot pink robes and solemnly asking the poor salesclerk if they were a good color for him?

Okay, stupid question. Of course you can picture it, you wrote it!

I really like your twin style. It really ticks me off when people have them alternating every other word, but you obviously don't have that problem.

This chapter was hilarious! You should rearrange them more often.