|Reviews for A Harry Situation|
| ina-anna-etta chapter 8 . 2/4/2007
“Madam Gretchen said they were the perfect color for your complexion,” George said.
“Well, for our complexion,” Fred amended. “But yours is the same as ours. So they should look good on you.”
Can't you just picture one of the twins holding up a frilly pair of hot pink robes and solemnly asking the poor salesclerk if they were a good color for him?
Okay, stupid question. Of course you can picture it, you wrote it!
I really like your twin style. It really ticks me off when people have them alternating every other word, but you obviously don't have that problem.
This chapter was hilarious! You should rearrange them more often.
| Fizzing Whizbee chapter 19 . 1/8/2007
Duh, she's a PHOENIX.
| blackspawndragon chapter 25 . 11/21/2006
| Hebi R chapter 14 . 11/17/2006
I really love the idea that Hermione is able to actually talk to her parents, which few authors seem to believe in. I am ashamed to admit that this is the chapter in ehich I figured out why you chose the names you did for Hermione's parents. I am enjoying this so much!
| Bookworm622 chapter 25 . 6/5/2006
i love it! but what happens? THIS IS SO LONG I LOVE IT! I HOPE THERE IS A SEQUEL!
| iiiiiiiiiiiii chapter 21 . 1/30/2006
This chapter was almost too fantastic for words; I had great fun reading it.
| iiiiiiiiiiiii chapter 13 . 1/28/2006
| Lori chapter 25 . 7/9/2005
I realize this is one of your older stories, but I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed it. Thank you so much for the many hours of pleasure you've given me. I look forward to reading your other work.
| braveheart28 chapter 2 . 2/24/2005
your stories are refreshing and wonderful
keep on writingtheese wonderful stories.
| Lyn Piton chapter 25 . 2/6/2005
What a great story! I loved the scene where Harry transfigured everything into "cat" items, and everything with Dusty, and the final scene with Cho was so touching.
| SafirePhoenix chapter 16 . 1/6/2005
| SafirePhoenix chapter 2 . 1/6/2005
You have a very dark sense of humor. That was nice of Hedwig and all, Harry's starving, so she coughs up her own lunch...
| Samli chapter 5 . 1/4/2005
Hmm, well, I don't think Molly is short for anything. One of my friends is named Molly, and it's just plain Molly. Not Margaret, or anything. And did it say her middle name was Molly in the books? I know that's Mrs. Weasley's name, though. I don't know. If I were you, though, unless you are sure, I'd omit the middle names if they aren't from the books.
By the way, I like this story so far. You might want to get the first and second chapters started faster, or use a hook in the first chapter (when you use one sentence that 'hook's the reader into the story, and then you reel them in by building on the hook, supporting it. I'm taking a creative writing class and we learned all about that, is all).
I'll be here reading, although I'm terrible at reviewing on a regular basis (i.e. every chapter) so you might not be hearing from me much, unless I have a suggestion. Just keep in mind that there are those who love to be lurkers and who just read it and cannot tear their eyes away from it, so the author has no clue of their existence.
Can't wait to read on, but now it's bedtime.
| Von chapter 25 . 12/27/2004
Ergh. Ginny. NOW I remember why I stopped reading.
I love your story.. I just can't stand Ginny. Sorry.
| Von chapter 21 . 12/27/2004
I started getting alerts for your NEXT story, but when I started reading, I was confused! I could have sworn I'd finished THIS one.. but.. (Frowns) I must have missed quite a few chapters. So I'm reading it now. By the way, If you won't let Harry stay single, I'll take ANYONE over Ginny. Please. Hell, even the twins!