Reviews for Double Life
TigerSneak1 chapter 7 . 4/12/2012
Hmmm... I was reading a review and it hypothesized Gold as being the person badmouthing the president. So I start at the beginning to find that spot. I finally found it. Could this have been Gold? A near perfect hacker, brilliant enough to stall Silver for a pretty long time? He is annoying, he is a student, and in Chapter 14, the hacker does say that he will "take care of them" and voila!, they meet Gold. Could he really be a hired hacker? Bah, this is too confusing! My imagination is running off in two different directions! While I accept the fact that he may have the skills and does have the personality to be the hacker, it is fighting the fact that Gold seems so naive upon meeting Red and Yellow. Argh! Why do you have to make this so confusing? But then again, the way you weave the unknown into the fabric of your story is flawless! It made an amazing story so much better! I can't wait for the truth to come out!
blazelight790 chapter 14 . 4/9/2012
great story going on so far. I can't believe that I didn't find it before XD

And BTW, is the Hoenn and Sinnoh trio gonna appear in this story? Just wondering
Stickman22 chapter 14 . 4/9/2012
Please no AmberShipping!

AmberShipping Bad, SpecialShipping good.

Chapter 13 was great, chapter 14 is great, please have SoulSilverShipping!
TheWolfsMoon chapter 14 . 4/5/2012
Well chapter 14 was a blast (i keep laughing how jealous/ evil yellow was here (she's totally showing her badass side more, which i do like!)~ Oh yay! more legendaries, Crystal and Gold finally makes appearance in the story.

Seems to me that they're going to Johto(woot! More adventures awaits there whats next hoenn? Lols jk)

In other news i never noticed that i've stopped reviewing since ch11 (which you pointed that out;thank you) sorry u i got excited and wanted to read on so badly that i just kept clicking next xD like now i would love to click next to see what happens
Treecko007 chapter 14 . 4/5/2012
I love this story plz plz update

HakuwoTheSeracianHero chapter 14 . 4/5/2012
Awesome chapter as always, really love gold's arrival and also with crystal's arrival this story should get even better than it originally was man this is worth the wait! Take time will college it is easy to lose your mind there. Hope you get the next chapter some time this month, but go an head and take time to finish college, from your fan hakuwo
Another forgotten account chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
SWEEEEEEEEEET~ A new chapter. I squeal whenever you update xD

Blue, Green, and Silver's cave explorations was just plain EPIC! Oh gosh, I don't know what I'd do if a shiny Mewtwo were attacking me. I'm so glad they got away! xD That cowardly Clefairy xD


AND GOLD! IN KANTO! Haha, caps.

Anyway, I adored Yellow's evil plot against Misty. I reeeeaaaalllly hate Misty. Glad Yellow does, too xD

I'm glad Misty realizes she's targeted... by that sweet, innocent blond. :D Gold hitting on Yellow? PRICELESS!

The legendaries are everywhere! What will happen? You are one damn good writer xD SO SUSPENSEFUL! Cannot wait~ for the next chapter. _
FireyKal chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
really great story so far, i had to try not to laugh sometine. anywho a few things, one i want to do a spinoff of sorts of the story, i have an idea starting to take shape. and two i want to say, your grammer and spelling is really good i havnt found any errors so far, but i have been wondering what are all the access levels in the story?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
OMG another great chapter I laughed at the part whee Green preferred being stuck with Blue and Silver than getting Yellows wrath and also the part when Cleffo used teleport and they thought that he was leaving everyone else behind hahaha hilarious. Keep it up
KiwiWizard chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
Ooo evil Yellow. lol I almost feel sorry for Misty, but I don't like her very much, so it's just funny XD Yellow is an evil genius in this story... I wonder when Red will find out. Gold and Crys were introduced yay! And Clefairy wasn't a complete coward. I wonder how they keep making shiny legendaries.
KiwiWizard chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
Sorry, somehow I missed this update... Yellow won! And Specialshipping, although I kind of wanted to hit Red during that bit...hah... I'm going to go read the next chapter now.
digidestined4eva chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
Looooving this story! 3 Sorry I can't leave a longer review.. I got no time atm D: I'll try next time? Anyway, yes, it's very cute! And LOL at how Yellow's out to get Misty... it's better that way :D I'm glad she's not just standing there soaking it up :D Go Yellow!
Berry Doyle chapter 14 . 4/3/2012
Yellow was unexpectedly mean this chapter. It was fun to see that side of her though, and how sharply it contrasts with her personality around Red.

Darn. You threw a wrench in my hacker theories. I suppose I'll just have to start thinking up new ones. Because you know what? I love mysteries. The villains in this are really fun. Interesting to see a bit of Anita's home life.

Well, a trip to Johto is always fun. It's one of my favorite regions, so I love getting to see things happen there.

Good luck with your last month of college!
AGirlWhoLikesToSayHi chapter 14 . 4/3/2012
Darn, so Mr. HackerGuy isn't Gold... oh, well. At least he and Crys made their debut! XD
Tsun-chan chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
Okay, so I've been reading this fanfic for a while now and I'm a little late in reviewing ; But I have a few things to say.

I LOVE this fanfic! The characterization is beautiful, especially Yellow's! I love how she's turning out! Silver and Blue have the cutest sibling relationship and I love how he's always protecting her.

The way the story is written is also MAGNIFICENT! The words just flow so well together and the descriptions are so vivid!

Oh, and the plot itself is so original and I love how you're in depth with it! Blue's Special notes really help with developing the world they're in.

And I was all "I wonder when the other dexholders will come out?" Then I read this chapter and I was all "OMG YES. GOLD AND CRYSTAL CAME OUT! 3 3 3"

But yeah ; Overall, I love this fanfiction and... / yeah, I'll go do my homework now /runs
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