|Reviews for Double Life|
| FireyKal chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
really great story so far, i had to try not to laugh sometine. anywho a few things, one i want to do a spinoff of sorts of the story, i have an idea starting to take shape. and two i want to say, your grammer and spelling is really good i havnt found any errors so far, but i have been wondering what are all the access levels in the story?
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
OMG another great chapter I laughed at the part whee Green preferred being stuck with Blue and Silver than getting Yellows wrath and also the part when Cleffo used teleport and they thought that he was leaving everyone else behind hahaha hilarious. Keep it up
| KiwiWizard chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
Ooo evil Yellow. lol I almost feel sorry for Misty, but I don't like her very much, so it's just funny XD Yellow is an evil genius in this story... I wonder when Red will find out. Gold and Crys were introduced yay! And Clefairy wasn't a complete coward. I wonder how they keep making shiny legendaries.
| KiwiWizard chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
Sorry, somehow I missed this update... Yellow won! And Specialshipping, although I kind of wanted to hit Red during that bit...hah... I'm going to go read the next chapter now.
| digidestined4eva chapter 14 . 4/4/2012
Looooving this story! 3 Sorry I can't leave a longer review.. I got no time atm D: I'll try next time? Anyway, yes, it's very cute! And LOL at how Yellow's out to get Misty... it's better that way :D I'm glad she's not just standing there soaking it up :D Go Yellow!
| Berry Doyle chapter 14 . 4/3/2012
Yellow was unexpectedly mean this chapter. It was fun to see that side of her though, and how sharply it contrasts with her personality around Red.
Darn. You threw a wrench in my hacker theories. I suppose I'll just have to start thinking up new ones. Because you know what? I love mysteries. The villains in this are really fun. Interesting to see a bit of Anita's home life.
Well, a trip to Johto is always fun. It's one of my favorite regions, so I love getting to see things happen there.
Good luck with your last month of college!
| AGirlWhoLikesToSayHi chapter 14 . 4/3/2012
Darn, so Mr. HackerGuy isn't Gold... oh, well. At least he and Crys made their debut! XD
| Tsun-chan chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
Okay, so I've been reading this fanfic for a while now and I'm a little late in reviewing ; But I have a few things to say.
I LOVE this fanfic! The characterization is beautiful, especially Yellow's! I love how she's turning out! Silver and Blue have the cutest sibling relationship and I love how he's always protecting her.
The way the story is written is also MAGNIFICENT! The words just flow so well together and the descriptions are so vivid!
Oh, and the plot itself is so original and I love how you're in depth with it! Blue's Special notes really help with developing the world they're in.
And I was all "I wonder when the other dexholders will come out?" Then I read this chapter and I was all "OMG YES. GOLD AND CRYSTAL CAME OUT! 3 3 3"
But yeah ; Overall, I love this fanfiction and... / yeah, I'll go do my homework now /runs
| twilightwrites chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
Yay! Crystal and Gold finally come into the picture! I seriously wasn't expecting the region hopping, but I figure that it was inevitable considering the glitches and chaos going on. I also found Yellow's plots against Misty to be pretty funny, even if I do like the red-head. I hope you update soon!
| TammyHybrid21 chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
Well this is great and as I stated before maybe you should mention how that one could get to be a gym leader or earn the gym leader statuse and what bug? Is the bug on yellow?
| splitheart1120 chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
Wait a second...
Are Misty, Red, and Yellow in Johto?
| 5th Dimension chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
Physically in Kanto, digitally in Johto.
Yep, when Yellow is mad, it's best to let her have her way.
Gold! Can't wait for him to meet Silver. And Crystal, although he might know her already (maybe not).
Lucky Clefairy. Metronome does a random move, so that was really lucky.
Poor Gold... as the breeder, he's naturally inclined to breed... but it never ends up his way.
It's rare to catch legendaries on the 'inside,' and you can't keep them... so it would be /very/ hard to get Dialga or Palkia. Unless... do the required items vanish after meeting the greater legends?
Hey, couldn't someone theoretically be able to talk in the 'outside' to someone on the 'inside?' Like the Matrix phone.
It seems Kanto has a legendary infestation. Huh.
And now Kanto's mostly empty. There's got to be only about a dozen trainers that can access the Kanto 'inside' now.
Blue's Special Notes Question: How do side games like Ranger and XD come into the picture? Do Fiore, Almia, Oblivia, and Orre even exist? (I can understand why PMD wouldn't, but I'm curious about the others.)
| BreadStarz chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
Gold and Crystal have arrived! Yes! This is getting so exciting!
Well, Gold should learn to never, ever, hit on Yellow without risking some kind of abuse to his body.
So, so Gold and Crystal know each other? Were they both after Suicune and Kyogre at the same time? Crystal's such a smarty :D Gotta catch 'em all!
Haha, I feel so sorry for Green, I mean he's always at the end of Yellow's glare. Nice.
Mannnn, Misty is so...well, eccentric. She's such a water pokemon maniac!
Good luck in college! Graduate...safely? Lol
| UnknownIdol chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
if i haven't then hi im me ive read this story for a while already and if i have then start from here :
your story is going more intresting every chapter i read
and im already wondering if it could be really possible to make such games as you have in your story ) good job with your story and keep it up imma sleep nao gnite
~aKKurate - or am i ?
| the Red King chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
great chapters keep it up :D