|Reviews for Double Life|
| helios193 chapter 18 . 8/3/2013
all i can say is whoa i just spent a good 5 hours reading every chapter and all i can say is this fic is amazing i love what you did with yellows character and the idea is really cool and unique
either way keep up the good work
p.s you get a free hug
| BeautifulRainbow chapter 18 . 8/1/2013
Heyyyyy. You don't seem like the type to ask for reviews, are you? Haha. ME LURV YOUR FIC. IT IS AWESOME. Haha..pls don't go on a long hiatus and mia. Your story is the best so far out of all the Red and Yellow fanfics. Teehee. Hope the next chapter comes put soon. I noticed you have been getting more reviews. ;)
| Aweshumme chapter 18 . 8/1/2013
Omggggg I Love the fluff between the characters in your story! It's just so heartwarming and I felt like I was on cloud nine just reading it. I absolutely, surely, undoubtedly, love it. Love the plot. Love the you, the author for writing such a fantastic, fabulous, wonderful, amazing, beautiful story. Please try to update more chappies!:))) Please? Haha just try. I can just read this fic forever.
| EeveeMistress chapter 18 . 8/1/2013
Finally! I was waiting for this chapter.
You did awesome, and the characters are amazing.
I wonder how if the crab liked Silver because of his personality or his hair...
| Anonymous again chapter 18 . 7/31/2013
Hey I really love your story! Continue writing and don't give up as you have us, your readers to cheer you on! Your story is awesome I swear! Red and Yellow fans are so rare! Almost extinct! Continue and persevere! :))
| Masquarie chapter 18 . 7/30/2013
I was wondering if you'd stopped writing this great to see it's still going so I'd like to know what you think of SAO I was so excited I ended up reading a ton of Au fics the week before the first dubbed episode came out also could you put in what happened with Silver and Lyra in the next chapter like in a flash back or something? Are you going to be updating more soon or is life going to be busy for awhile?
| Emperor Andross chapter 18 . 7/28/2013
Really, REALLY good story. I like the shipping, I like the adventure. The plot is like a fusion of the Matrix and Myst what's not to like? Really impressive.
BTW, I think you should continue with Blue's notes, they lend an air of authenticity to the story, and there is till plenty to cover, like the evolution from 8-bit games to the current system, how the system works as far as what happens to the user when they're on the inside. Another thing that you might cover, as it has been puzzling me, is that the teachers don't appear to understand what happens when the students visit the inside, it's almost like the inside is a semi secret, that some people are in on and others aren't, if that is the case, you could play it up a little more, and perhaps include something about what you have to do to unlock the inside (as I'm sure would be the case if it really existed).
Great work, keep it up!
| FeralBlastoise chapter 18 . 7/28/2013
Heyy, it's FeralBlastoise, aka Silver Dragon!
NO, I like being telepathic :3
You should have Gold and Crystal meet Lyra who should be related to Crystal and then Lyra introduces them to Silver and then Gold should be all like "OMG I KNOW YOU!" idk that's how I imagined it xD
| Emperor Andross chapter 4 . 7/28/2013
I really like the concept so far. I can guess where all this is going, but still enjoying the ride.
| LilPurrfection chapter 18 . 7/25/2013
A truly fascinating take on pokemon fanfiction. This the first time I've read anything like it. Just a quick question though on your Crystal Legendary Notes. If Articuno has never never been caught, then how Ho-oh have been caught twice?
| ReyDelEmpire chapter 18 . 7/23/2013
I love the pairings in this story soo much! I love Yellow's personality in this fic, really original. The whole SpecialShipping going on here makes me drool for the next chapter. You are doing a great job, keep up the good work.
| Orange Lilies and Red Roses chapter 18 . 7/22/2013
Ugh, why can't Blue just have her way so Red and Yellow will get together QAQ. Seriously, Red, can you not see Yellow's feels for you. It's making me cry.
The jerks needa lay off Yellow and Red needs to stop being so oblivious for like 5 minutes.
(Not that I'm demanding it or anything, because what's Specialshipping without an oblivious Red?)
Can I just tell you that I love the way you write Red? Since a lot people exaggerate with the "Red-is-an-overly-nice-and-very-oblivious-idiot" thing, your version of Gentleman Red is a nice change. I mean, the oblivious part is still there but your writing doesn't make him seem like a hyperactive dumbass.
And omg, omg, SoulSilvershipping, omg /fangirling. I love this shipping so much. I feel like Lyra would be the one to stop Silver from being so hung up on Blue and being so gloomy. Ugh, god bless you for putting this shipping into the story.
Anyways, that was awesome. Take your time with the next chapter, no rush; rushed chapters are never good.
Also, congrats on 300 reviews!
Orange Lilies and Red Roses
(I totally got hooked on Miscellaneous Tale of Night and Day too, but luckily it was on a long week end so I finished the written chapters without trouble)
((gonna follow you on tumblr and stalk you btw))
(((then we can be bffs!)))
((((jk, ok maybe not bffs))))
| Remepie chapter 18 . 7/22/2013
One of my favorite fics on here! You don't want to know how many squeals and fangirly screams I did when I saw this updated today. Keep up the good work and please, PLEASE, keep updating!
| ChillinLikeaVillain chapter 18 . 7/21/2013
YES, BEACH CHAPTER.
Still love this story.
| McEAero8 chapter 18 . 7/21/2013
Yea! New update! I've been waiting forever for this moment!