|Reviews for Ling's Proposel|
| Shimori chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
Very nice my friend, very nice. Well Done I also recommend reading this about mustang and riza its also a good one too
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Aww. Rly satisfying to read
| nopoliceplease chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
It was really, really good except for the way it went about Ling with open eyes - it seems like Ling lives with closed eyes only seldom opening them. It seems simply wrong and weird. Yeah, in manga or anime it seemed like that but I think it was just to empathize Ling's narrow (not closed) eyes.
| SevenGemsOfLove chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
| Alizanna chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I abousloutley loved Lings propsel
And the way you repersented it was
Pure genius. Have u considered being
An author because with your language
Structure it may as well
An overall rating I say it is
| lovguru23 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
great story. very great story.
| Perseus Vulcan chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
you should make a squeal this is really good you no do that adventure or some thing
| KurenoxArisaxx chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Ooh~ I love that ending. This fic was too cute and Ling's adviser was so sweet to give him that talk. Awesome fic. I hope you write more of these two someday
| i-Spit-on-Fire chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Please help this slow girl and tell me why Ling would need Ed? LOVE IT!
| noodle-freak chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
That was ssooo cute and sweet and amazing! I loved it!Awesome job! XD
| sayfriendandenter chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Awwww! The world needs more Ling/Lan Fan fluff ) They are so ment to be together. Everyone knows it even though some ma be in denial] ;). I loved your story [especially the ending]. D
| Sweetblood1918 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Awww This was soo good!
| redrose chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Very Cute! i think this would have been a good lemon though, but it was still very good!