|Reviews for False Starts Harry Potter|
| Ocicat chapter 14 . 2/16
| Nebresh chapter 14 . 1/24
| Nebresh chapter 10 . 1/24
nice chapter! I like it
| Nebresh chapter 3 . 1/24
I think I just love that one...
| Petin Naahl chapter 17 . 12/17/2013
lol pixies. hehehe.
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/5/2013
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/5/2013
I agree, this is a great idea.
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/5/2013
I would make Slayer a notably stronger human subrace. Probably need a lever adjustment though...
| capctr chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
Whew! How can you NOT turn this into a full-blown novel length fic? It has all the qualities of pure awesomeness.
| Starfox5 chapter 14 . 11/29/2013
A, a good start, it really needs to see Fudge and Umbridge brought down for their crimes.
| Starfox5 chapter 11 . 11/29/2013
Very good idea. And a better, far more just and happy ending than the books provide - less muggleborn dead, more pureblood murders dead, corrupt wizarding culture destroyed. And probably Harry and Hermione becoming a couple over the shared experience.
| Da Fox chapter 17 . 11/26/2013
Oh God, I couldn't stop laughing.
Funniest thing I've read in a while.
Keep up the great work!
| Blood Brandy chapter 17 . 11/25/2013
Oh dear lord, there must be more of this.
| Anansii chapter 10 . 11/18/2013
This strikes me as fine the way it is. :).
| Anansii chapter 9 . 11/18/2013
Interesting setup, If there ever is any more I'd like to see it.