Reviews for The Order of the Phoenix Kidnaps Annabeth Chase
Guest chapter 7 . 6/13
Shouldn't it be spelt Herry not Harry?
Guest chapter 13 . 5/23
Hey more torture porn. Get a life you sick fuck.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/23
This story is pissing me off.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/23
Author seems fond of torturing her characters and giving nothing good to make up for it. Another sick fuck with disgusting fantasies.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/23
Getting tired of Harry just always doing as he’s told instead of sticking up for himself. Not into reading about a lame doormat. Sorry your main character is acting like a weak ass pussy. Losing interest in this quickly.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/23
Why doesn’t anyone tell her to FUCK OFF! Why does everyone just roll over for that hariden. Jesus I want to punch Molly in the throat every time she opens her damn mouth.
Monster King chapter 24 . 4/8
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.
Robby the Cyber Warrior chapter 24 . 3/29
This was really good. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes, and you use the wrong word consistently for a few things throughout the story, but it's not enough to pull you out of reading this because the story itself is too good. I'm about to check your profile for a sequel because I'd love to read more of this storyline, but whether I find one or not, thank you for writing and sharing this
Robby the Cyber Warrior chapter 23 . 3/29
Harry finally getting to live with Sirius makes me so damn happy!
Robby the Cyber Warrior chapter 20 . 3/29
I think Harry and Piper are adorable. I can understand someone preferring another ship, maybe their canon pairings, but calling it "weird" doesn't really make sense to me
Nitin Ambati chapter 11 . 1/5
You really need an editor to fix your spelling mistakes but other than that I'm enjoying the story. Hopefully harry gains some muscle.
Lucinda Hindle chapter 23 . 12/12/2017
If they are doing what they are doing, please enlighten me of their age.
Lucinda Hindle chapter 9 . 12/10/2017
Of course there is evil inside Harry, but Harry is not evil.
We know what that means, but I wonder how that sounds to those who don't...
Lucinda Hindle chapter 6 . 12/10/2017
Are you really serious? Of course that son of Zeus is Voldemort! I mean, siriusly? Split soul, powerful, mother died while giving birth, changed name, rule the world...
Lucinda Hindle chapter 5 . 12/10/2017
Uh, did it have to be Hera? Does he even have any powers? I don't think so, except maybe being able to play love matcher very well, anyway, I like it so far.

You need a beta, very badly. Something tells me English isn't your first language.
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