Reviews for Ash's Battle 3rd in Series
serenityselena chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
interesting sequel... Ash and Misty are still dancing around each other :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Great 1shot series i am so looking forward to the next one shot
Brennason chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Your stories are so great! I loved Brock's input on Adg and Misty's feelings for each other. That always cracks me up. Are you planning on writing more for this series?
lone-monster chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
you did an amazing job to create ash/misty atmosphere.. not ooc at all.. but i do wait for the true lemon between them, and i admit you write their sexual tension so well..
kevin1984 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
how much you actually know about pokemon. metagross, scizor, aggron, mawhile, are a few that electric attacks work on, only reason it doesnt work on steelix is he steel/rock type. the rock type keeps him from taking electric attacks.

good story but if your going to explain a little about steel types then you need to know yourself.
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
song of the dead chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
your wrong eltroc does do damage to steel types but no much posion is useless agiast this my account name
Odinson91 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
You got me skippy. I'm actually a fan of mythology, am so that's the reason for the name
Hayles45 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011

I loved this! The characterization was perfect, and I adored the way you wrote their interactions! It was so sweet!

The ending was funny too, typical Ash to say something like that!

Thanks for a great read!

Hayles45 :D