Reviews for The Missing Prince
silentnightsparkle chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Great first chapter, so many questions which I'd have to wait for answers too. Now I'm of to check out the second chapter
lil-lubear chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
Nice update, keep it up team dragon star
caught in a moment chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
Let me tell you great job with both of the chapters so far.

The first chapter made me feel sad, I wanted to cry, then again Chi Chi is a character I like. Then with the second chapter I found it generally interesting and I am intrigued to see how the next chapter is developed and how Videl will be fully introduced.

So far I am going to say that Gohan to the max and Zi Dawg have done an excellent job, both of their writing styles (though different) compliment each other nicely. I hope to see those two writing more collaboration chapters together
Ellabydoll chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
Pretty good considering you just winged it. Im looking forward to more team dragon star chapters
Gohan-to-the-max chapter 2 . 8/2/2011
Wow Zi, you've done a good job with this chapter, it was really interesting :D
utaharu chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
Great chapter! Kind of threw me off at him going to school so suddenly... But still, great one. Update soon!
Kakarot Son chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
Ahh... Marvelous Zi, 'specially for winging it... I'd have never been able to do something like that. Just saying though, you may want a key, of some sort to seperate first person sections from third person ones...

Well it looks like we used a time lapse, to 6 yearslater... This will be interesting, and I can't wait to help...

Great job man!

xturtle787x chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
I enjoyed it! I thought you did good picking up a story that you hadn't started: the chapters fit together nicely. It's a very interesting idea of Gohan being someone everyone thought died years ago, but then he shows up! Unrecognizable maybe, but still.

Hope you decide to continue this!

Great work!

lil-lubear chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Wow, So far this story is intense. The first chapter managed to make me cry which I'm a reader of Gohan to the max and I know she can write emotional chapters but I can see where other members of TDS have edited it. So far this is really good and I'm hoping for an update soon enough
Ri696q chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Looking good. Really interesting. Definitely has me caught xD
Pink Sparkles chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This story is AWESOME! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work! D
Mariposa chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
It was a sad chapter since chi-chi and goku die. But anyway it was a good chapter please continue.
Hmrtaylor chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
By all means continue!

My heart aches for him. The Young Ox King.
Dr. Blue22 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Really Interesting story ya got here, And man Videl, wonder what she thinks now? and wondering if the press caught him transforming, and whats with the Orange? and then theirs Goten did he survive? he was only 5 months i dont think thats possible to be born that early. then again he is half saiyan so maybe :D

Update soon! this story and "A Home Once Lost" that hasnt been updated since you posted it :( its a great idea and shows promise, just needs to be updated! :D

Cmon Guys, and Girls! you write spectacular stories!
utaharu chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I cried. I actually cried! XD This had a lot of effect on me. Great job, and continue!
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