Reviews for Apart
Jammie13 chapter 1 . 2/22
It was great! I was so sad until the last few paragraphs!
POETIF chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Don't know why you thought it bad at all. It was a good story. Of all those I've read after his departure it was the most original. So, good job I say. Keep writing.
Flowery chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
It wasn't bad at all. It was great! It would be the perfect guest appearance for Meloni... would finally bring the closure we all want.
Ayshen chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
At first I was all sad panda for Liv...but then El showed up, being all El. And when he touched her belly, died. So beautiful!
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad that everything worked out!
JessicaBrightstar chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
D'Awww, that was cute((: Me gusta 3
SVUfanatic4 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
That was so sweet! loved it!
zebraboymom chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Loved it! Absolutely loved it. Wish they could write this in and get him to make a guest appearance. That would give it the closure we all want so badly. Thanks for that.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
you are an amazing writer! i loved this! great job! please always keep writing you have an amazing talent!
Lilgreenbrat93 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Will you do a one-shot where Elliot and Olivia are together and they are at work and olivia has a remote control vibrator. I dnt know something like that plz :)
Sam 'Dimples' Swarek chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Oh wow! For a minute I thought el had left totally but I'm so glad he just moved jobs and he is with liv and are having a baby. Send it into DW this would be a great part to an episode. But obviously we want to see them get together first then some sex scenes!
lizAnne379 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Awwww that was a cute one! I love the cuter more romantic ones where they aren't constantly jumping eachother:)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Update soon pppllleeeaaassseee
kiamay chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
A great story! Misleading in a good and creative way :D I love it.
stowns81 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
That was so good I don't even have words for it!
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