Reviews for Dead Rising:Off The Record
Actionsparda chapter 5 . 3/5
It's honestly really old the way it's been going. You worked in everyone to this version of the story well, using a good ad healthy combination of the original dialogue and new text based on the characters and their words and personalities in other games. I really wish you were still writing : (
Guest chapter 6 . 5/29/2013
why cancel it now? if there was of dead rising 2 off the record. the their can be dead rising off the record. if only you could continue ( which if you don't then i'm ok) or capcon make this!
Pollardinator chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Interesting idea,and a good opening to thing though,if theres a flashback it might be better to put it in italics to make it stand out,so the flow of teh story isn't a suggestion but,eitehr way,a good story!
frow234 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Nicely done !
eh chapter 6 . 6/12/2012
eh
Haley's-Leatherjackets chapter 5 . 2/2/2012
Great story it has alot of potential and I can see Capcom making this as a DLC

Keep it going bro, I wonder if Pyscho Frank will return?
Helloivecoveredwars1 chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
This is just a great story. The only thing that I can say is the intro isn't solid enough. Why would they be going to a mall to see a movie if they don't even live in that town? When I originally thought about this idea a few months back, I thought Chuck would be there for an Ijiek convention. Still, great story, honestly I think when your finished you should send it in to Capcom for them to see. Thats how good it is.
Piklink chapter 5 . 11/11/2011
Oh shit, Frank lost it 0_0 I never thought I would hear his catch-phrase being used in an evil way XD
ttobba95 chapter 5 . 11/6/2011
May i ask, did OneWing give you permission to use her story as a chapter for this fic?
OneWingedAngel070993 chapter 5 . 11/5/2011
All I can say is well done LOL :D Keep up the good work I know you can do it. XXX
Piklink chapter 4 . 11/1/2011
I really like this! Idk what you plan to do now, since it's been 2 months since you updated, but it'd be awesome if you continued with this!
Meowth's Toon Dragon chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
I gotta admit... This ain't half bad!

A FEW spelling and grammar errors on occasion, but for the most part, this is really solid!

I'm eager to see more!
writer of the apocalypse chapter 4 . 9/1/2011
This is pretty cool so far, but you keep using some of Frank's lines " Don't sneak up on me like that!" I just wanted to point out that the two have very different personalities, so it'd be a good idea to change up the dialog in the future.
writer of the apocalypse chapter 3 . 8/28/2011
Very nice, can't wait for more.
ttobba95 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
This story has potential, but the way you've written it does not. I encourage you to write longer sentences and better paragraphs. Give more detail.

This is not a flame, it is mearly constructive criticism. If you want, i can offer my help to make this fic good. You could start by re-writing the first chapter using the tools i explained above.

Do not give up on this story, make it better. Again, i can help you.

ttobba