Reviews for A Hero and his Yaoi
KikuKicksAss chapter 3 . 5/29
I love this fanfiction so much!
kiku-honda12 chapter 2 . 10/15/2013
I love this Please keep adding!
Inazuma11Freak chapter 2 . 4/18/2013
This is amazing. :D Sad to see it's been sorta neglected. Could you possibly consider continuing it? You know, if it weren't a hassle.

Just, one small note. Just one. No harm.

"... CAN'T EAT THIS ONE!"
I'm sorry, Alfie. Were you implying you've eaten other impossibly adorable guys before spotting Keeks? ._.

AHH! Shy Kiku is has arrived! Shy, fragile, adorable, delicate, gentle... (sorry, I got caught up) Kiku needs more attention in fandom! Generally, Kiku needs the spotlight! And AmeriPan too! Definitely anything linked to Japan needs more love. n_n
the-emo-uke-boy chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
i love it
Otaku is an Understatement chapter 3 . 4/1/2012
You could put Futbol instead of Football because Futbol means Soccer.
hetaliahetaoni chapter 3 . 3/20/2012
soccer was originally from somewhere in italy, spain or south america... wasn't it ._. i think it's cuz america came up with it's own game they called football then australia made it's own!:D
Xiina chapter 2 . 2/8/2012
I'm honestly an Asakiku fan and wanted to try out Ameripan, and started off with this. I loved it~ I now think I'll go for Ameripan if it's anything similar to this. Plus, I still like Gakuen Hetalia because it's cute. Update quickly soon please~ :)
XxGabbyGirlxX chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
I read that this was Ameripan, and I was like "...dude, I'm going to love this."

I start reading, and I love it already. Oh Alfred. You so funneh.

I see the My Immortal ref... and I have decided that I love you forever, author. :D Ameripan, well-written stuff, /and/ a My Immortal ref...? You are awesome. C:
Hana1654 chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
Too cute!
Rachpop chapter 3 . 10/30/2011
because we like being different. :)

This is the first yaoi related thing i've read... congrats. NOW TO STEAL MY IRISH FRIENDS YAOI!
Kohaku Megumi chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
Cuuuuute x) I like Alfred's overview of the day. Basically everything's boring without Kiku or food. xD

I saw no grammar errors.

Update soon
Lydiacatfish chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
Yeah, you're doing okay on the Japanese, but it is spelled "konnichiwa" when you transfer it over from the hiragana. It can mean a general hello, or "good afternoon", where "ohayo (gozaimasu added to that to be polite)" is good morning, and "konbanwa" is good evening/night. And "goodnight" for when you're going to sleep is "oyasumi nasai", I think.

Oh god, now I feel like a weeaboo...I can't help it, I've been taking Japanese for over a year now...oh well.

That was short.
Nijimi Daiquiri chapter 2 . 8/11/2011
I had no idea I didn't review this...

But please continue it! I...I really like it. :D

FFFF Is Alfred seriously going to do that before Kiku gets there? xD What if someone walks in on him? :P

Oh well, I'll forever love this story!
ElectrikBluPanda chapter 2 . 8/10/2011
This is quite honestly the cutest fanfict i have EVER read. Great job! I can't freaking wait to read more!
Kohaku Megumi chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
Omg I love this xD I saw the title, and I was like, MUST READ NAAOOO. xD And what happened to Kiku reminds me of what I - almost - said in front of my class. Luckily, I'm a quick liar xD

Anyway, I saw no errors or grammar mistakes or anything :I

Update soon~
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