Reviews for Her Emotional Range
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
Love it. Perfect.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
aww...cute but sad
DobbyLovesSocks chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
That was brilliant. You captured Hermione quite well, especially the last line,
F Maurice chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Very good. You've captured her sense of betrayal and hate very well here.
Bluerain22 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This just about broke my heart! I keep repeating in my head, they are soul mates, happily married, with children! Good job bringing on the emotions!
Andrea Weasleyy chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I really like this one. One of my favourites
scorpiusrose chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
omg, i can't.. it's breaking MY heart. beautifully written though!
Sara chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
This was amazing! I absolutely LOVE Ron and Hermione, and all the ups and downs in their relationship, and I think you nailed exactly what Hermione was thinking then! I felt so bad for her, but this was still a great fic. :)
Hope-W chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
poor mione,my heart broke with hers.
Alquimista chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
not bad... but Hermione is delusional... Her problem was she NEVER put herself in "a position of vulnerability", and her 'hints' were from pathetic to non-existent... She always put her more 'hard side' towards Ron... she never did something to show any 'special affection' to Ron...

Some examples...

Her reaction to Ron's perfume... pathetic

Her reaction to Ron's badge as prefect... even more pathetic!

She can tell how fancinable, and tall, and interesting was Harry... but Ron?...

In the quiddicht area... she wasn't exactly 'supportive' of Ron capabilities...

Harry didn't show in many Slug-parties... because he don't need the attention and to show Ron He is more important than a stupid party... but Hermione?... of course, she went to ALL parties... who cares about Ron's feelings?


In short... I think Hermione wasn't ready to give Ron what he needed... uncritical, unconditional love (Lavender was)... Hermione was too deep in her own insecurities/selfishness to do anything serious about Ron... (and her ridiculous attempt to ask Ron to the Slug party shows it)

The fic. is fine, but it could be good to make a second chapter with someone (Harry or Ginny) showing her the 'reality' of her 'situation' with Ron... and, if Ginny, a little confession about a 'leak' of some information about krum and her... a information that could make Ron to think she wasn't interested in him.
Sarcastic-Bones chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Aww, this sums up Hermione's thoughts so well and completely fits with that whole scene and Hermione's reaction with attacking Ron with the birds. I really liked this one, even though she's sad and thinks Ron doesn't love her because, honestly, what else was she supposed to think when Ron started kissing Lavender? I can't believe you're on HBP already! But at least that means DH Part 2 is SOOOOOO close!
13dramaqueen13 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This was beautiful! Her emotions are described so genuinely, and she is perfectly in character. This was very well written :)
siriuslyweasley chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I think that you did a really good job describing the moment and how Hermoine felt. Good work!
asiriusfanff chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I love this. I'm a huge R/Hr shipper, and I love their roller coaster of a relationship, both the ups and the downs. I love it.