Reviews for Waiting Game
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Okay, so I'm gonna review this :P

First of all, KUDOS to you for writing the second-person perspective so well. It's difficult. I've never attempted it, personally, because for some reason it squicks me to be referring to Tony as 'you'; and I've also rarely read a fic where it's done well.

But it's done well here. I don't find this OOC at all; I think it's very in character, in fact! I really like how you've captured Tony's thoughts, and his ... ramblyness, and his love for Ziva. I think you've really gotten his viewpoint right.

Thanks for sharing!

xoxonessie chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I don't think it was so OOC. I quite liked it in fact, it didn't sound wrong to me. Nice work, it was a pretty thing to read.
SomeKindaWonderful chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Wow, really deep and touching
KYTIVAFAN chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
good trip "inside" Tony's head...
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Good trip inside Tony's head. I like to think he feels this way about her!

Thank you for putting it down on paper so well!
unbrokensaviorwithperfecthair chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This line made me laugh: 'a silver-haired man who believes that brain trauma is an effective form of education'.

This was a really long one-shot! Whew. But a well written, great Tiva one.
IronIsraeliButterfly chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
That was absolutely the best Tiva story I have ever read. The careful progression, the exquisite grasp of Tony's character, the original viewpoint all culminated in a masterpiece. I am very impressed with your writing style. Keep it up.