Reviews for My Brother's Friends
gatorgrl91 chapter 17 . 10/28/2013
Loved the sarcastic side of Bella! That's my fav kind of Bella! Truly funny! I love E and B together and their horn dog ways! ;)Tthe angst wasn't too bad, and like you said, it was needed! I got a little confused on the change in occupations of Renee (incense changed to interior design), Charlie, and Alice, but no biggie.
Overall, a winner!
KylaJH14 chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
Ugh ew why Riley!?
KylaJH14 chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
Ewww Riley
Runaway'96 chapter 17 . 9/14/2013
Loved this story! I enjoyed reading it!
mnov29 chapter 17 . 6/7/2013
Loved this story!
Guest chapter 17 . 1/29/2013
very cute story.
Giggles2010 chapter 3 . 12/14/2012
I realize its a story it's just since vb is my sport I get a little crazy about it like the fact u have given no indication of what position she plays is she the setter hitter ds libero what also the hole party scene no self respecting athlete would go to a party and get drunk or high or anything like that ugh it just... It doesn't work like that in the world of competitive vb at least not where I'm from. Anyways good chapter
Giggles2010 chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
Good story so far but as a serious vb player that has played club since 13's I have serious issues with her attitude towards playing and her food choices I won't go on a rant now but b warned it might happen in the future
EmziBob chapter 17 . 12/6/2012
awesome story :) loved it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Wow, this sucks. o.o
Mz-Star chapter 17 . 10/3/2012
Awww I thought daddyward would make and appearance :( lol great story
Guest chapter 17 . 9/30/2012
Beautiful. Especially when she listens to facebook :)
Jhimly chapter 11 . 9/29/2012
This book is really good. Keep it up. Also thank you for finishing the story. Not like other authors that do not finish their story. :)
Kewi11 chapter 17 . 8/6/2012
That was so cute! I feel like the ending was a bit rushed compared to the way the story was moving along, but it was still very good. I'm excited to read more of your work.
deesirius chapter 7 . 6/28/2012
Are you really 16...? Is this a joke? I mean, yes you portrait a 16 yr very well. But your writing skills are so impressive. Anyways, glad I found this story Im really enjoying it, I dont even wanna know how it is that you write lemons so well. But then again...I was 16 I guess I understand! D
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