Reviews for Seafoam
x-Empire chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
This was amazing. Well written and thought out. I haven't read something this beautiful for a while.

And that last line: perfect.
SushiBomb chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Yaaaaaay you posted it! I'm glad, because this piece is so wonderful. I know I've already technically reviewed it, but what the hell, you can hear it again. I loved reading it even more the...hmm...fourth time? Ever time I read it, I really got the sense of the odd bond between Squalo and Bel. The relationship you've presented in this piece is powerful, beautiful, disturbing in some ways, and yet...oddly innocent. I can't really explain it. I guess perhaps it's because of the slight incoherency of it. I can feel Bel's panic, and his confusion as he comes to terms with his feelings and inner turmoil. Squalo was there at just the right time, and I love the way his presence alone just reconfirmed everything for Bel. I love this piece!
thesoulalchemist chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
a great debut.

makes me think about starting my own account.

i think this is the first time in more than 6 months that i've reviewed.

well...

all the more proof of your talent.

lovely analogy.

clear enough to make sense,

complex enough to keep me continue thinking about it,

weighing in the many different possibilities for it's facets.

seafoam.

continue on to write more stories-

i'll be keeping track of your progress.