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vkasholo chapter 12 . 12/30/2012
please write more soon
Taylor chapter 12 . 3/13/2012
This is really good!Please right more soon!If you were to have a song playing or something (I don't know if you were going to have singing parts) then the song should be Let's just falll in love again by Jason you listen to it,you could see how it fits perfectly with what's going on!Again, I love this and I hope you write more soon!
Cake34 chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
Please Please Contiune! I Love this
RandomstalkerNOWWITHausername chapter 12 . 12/30/2011
I'm not reading another story by another person just to understand this one, good luck.
MagnussLightwood chapter 12 . 12/30/2011
Can he slightly remember? Is that even possible? Lol. I loved the new chapter. Can't wait for the next one! Keep up the good work:D
RandomstalkerNOWWITHausername chapter 9 . 12/17/2011
Okay, I've been reading this, and the plot's good. The characters, however, are very confusing. It seemed relatively normal, until a guy came in squirting holy water and jabbering about auras he can see or sense or whatever. You need to work on your dialog, try giving the charaters more character. So rather than "Ok, your right" try "Blaine sighed, trying to calm down 'I-I guess you're right I just-'" win more commas to help the flow of the reading. I hope you see this as constructive criticism (as it is) and not flaming, I never wanna down talk a story for no reason, so Write On
MagnussLightwood chapter 11 . 12/15/2011
I liked it. It was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next one, keep up the good work:)
10thWeasley chapter 10 . 10/25/2011
I hope you update this soon, it's a wonderful story!
MagnussLightwood chapter 10 . 9/17/2011
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one... Keep up the good work:)
lcelinaoc chapter 7 . 8/26/2011
I was kind of confused about the Alice in Wonderland references at first but I caught on easily and may I add, it's pretty ingenious. Nice job. I like the story so far, the characters are really well written and don't seem too OOC to me :)
MagnussLightwood chapter 9 . 8/26/2011
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

Keep up the good work:)
GleekPotterKid chapter 8 . 8/21/2011
awesome! please update soon!
dreamer 3097 chapter 8 . 7/31/2011
a good one
MagnussLightwood chapter 8 . 7/30/2011
Great chapter... I still feel bad for Blaine.

Anyways... Keep up the good work,can't wait for the next chapter:)
MagnussLightwood chapter 7 . 7/26/2011
I wanna hug Blaine right now...

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one...

Keep up the good work:)
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