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![]() ![]() You captured the characters beautifully. Nice story of sacrifice and partnership. |
![]() ![]() Nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() KUDOS |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found your fics. Loving them. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! Cute! Steve and Danny love to bicker even when they're glad to see each other as fine and not hurt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. |
![]() ![]() You really ought to make this longer. I can just hear Danno spluttering about the "not having any spam" remark, not understanding, and then telling the paramedics that Steve may be concussed because he's not making any sense. I hope you go back and flesh this out a bit more; I'd like to know more about the beginning, too. What brought our boys to the top of the cliff? Who are the baddies? Was Chin also at the top of the cliff, or did Danny call him? Where's Kono? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Insight into McG and his family... Would love to see more of that on Show! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ..."You're my partner."... Steve understands now. ...Greg Louganis skills... Nice touch. Damned good diver. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Story! |
![]() ![]() Great story again. Really well written, thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! That was great! I could sooooo see Steve doing something like that! I really loved how you brought the memories into the story! I was just thinking maybe Spam should become a mandatory accesory for the 5-0 team, just like their gun and cell phone! :) Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story combining both past and present ... thanks |