This is one of the greatest things I've ever read. Jfc, it's perfect.

Ermagerd. You've literally plucked out nearly the exact scenario I had in my head for a Solok fic. But given how much I hate my own writing, I've never written it down.

Pon Farr incooimmmiiiiiing.

That's a really cute story! I with there were more fanfics about Solok, he can be a very complex character that could be well developed. Maybe you someday would like to write another one? Lol
Thank for this good time!

beautiful thanks for writing. ️

Hey I really love your story! And that you talk about Oaxaca and mole ️ thanks for that! One thing that made me laugh is buenos tardes .

Por que en México sería: buenas tardes y en verdad sonó raro cuando lo leí .
Normalmente el buenos (en masculino) solo es para:
*Buenos días
*Buenos deseos (por ejemplo)
*Buenos niños

Y ya! creo (no sé por qué no se me ocurre otra ocasión para usar buenos como ejemplo).

Me refiero a cuando saludamos y eso. Es
Buenas tardes, buenos días, buenas noches.
(El masculino solo es para decear buen día) .
En fin de nuevo gracias por escribir me está gustando mucho tu historia!
( Y espero que no suene como un regaño o algo así :'v
realmente yo batalló mucho con el inglés y me gustaría que me dijeran estás cosas ️).

Enemies to friends is such a cliche and yet I'm loving how their relationship is slowly evolving

nice :)

I like how Tia was right about him trying to get rid of her.

OMG, Solok's pov next!

I'm beyond excited!

I appreciate Tia being so level headed. I wonder if Solok is a sneaky Vulcan due to his personality or if I've misjudged all Vulcans. It would be quite the insight if we had his point of view written. I'd love to read it.

I really enjoyed this chapter as well.

I must say that Solok is being very forward. I understand that touching in the Vulcan culture is very intimate. Touching the face is a very intimate touch for humans, too. It indicates affection.

I think what I'm trying to say is that I wish I knew what Solok thinks. Tia seems to feel, at least when she uses the word "triumphant," that Solok still sort of looks down on her. Though I may be wrong, of course. Perhaps the connotation I get from the word choice is mistaken on my part.

This was a great chapter. I really loved the detail of the water and even the embarrassing talk about mating, lol.

Thanks for sharing such a good story!

Very interesting. This sort of escalated quickly, lol.

I do like the "game" she mentions going on between them. I wonder if Solok is aware of what he is doing.
I also hope that everything works out for Tia. I hate when people's emotions are found out and they are mocked. It sounds like the Vulcans in this story would do that, probably.
I also appreciate the titles! I enjoy titles to chapters. They add flavor to the story overall.

I like your story so far. It's very hard to find good Vulcan fanfiction. I wonder how this one will turn out!

I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism. I feel there was more telling than showing in this chapter. It's most likely because it's the very beginning and you probably don't want a slow burn or build up of background, which I appreciate. I'm sure the rest of your story will be great!

A very entertaining story.