Reviews for Landscape: Fictionista WitFit Prompts, Summer 2011
Guest chapter 39 . 3/6/2014
This whole Bella feeling sorry for herself is getting really old
Guest chapter 38 . 3/6/2014
You can tell right here she is not ready for a relationship. She needs to work on herself love herself...get better...work with her daughter before she focuses on someone else.
Guest chapter 30 . 3/6/2014
She is so dramatic
Guest chapter 29 . 3/6/2014
Don't jump into anything
Guest chapter 27 . 3/6/2014
Why didn't she go to sleep when her daughter left?
Guest chapter 22 . 3/6/2014
To fast
Guest chapter 21 . 3/6/2014
She needs to stop comparing Edward and jasper...she also needs to stay in the friend zone with Edward.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/5/2014
I'm confused...she was going on what a wonderful father jasper was...now Edward has some special kind of relationship with s child that jasper didn't even have. What?
Guest chapter 6 . 3/5/2014
I would have left her ungrateful ass
Guest chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
She is really feeling sorry for herself. What's the matter with her. She needs some help...she's pissing me off.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2014
She should be putting her daughter first. I'm kind of mad at Bella right now
dbpbatm chapter 52 . 2/1/2014
Really sweet story!
kitkat3051 chapter 52 . 11/2/2013
Loved it!
TX Bottle Blonde chapter 10 . 10/24/2013
This is the second story you've written that I've read and I'm hooked. You have such a unique pacing and your characters seem so realistic. I feel as though I'm hearing a story from a friend of this family. Thanks for your time and talent. I hope you continue to write.
Mell C chapter 52 . 10/23/2013
Thank you for a well written and heartfelt story. I read After enjoying Dear Mr. Masen.
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