Reviews for Cyber
cutecumbers chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
LOL. Very original. Loved it. New chapter soon...? ;)
art-liv chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
TELL ME YOU KNOW ELLIOT'S SKYPE NAME.

OMG OMG OMG. UNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNF.
PushTheButtton chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
What can I say? Holy Hotness Batman...

Umm I think we should know what happens in twenty? Just sayin' lol ;)
hopelesslydevoted2svu chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
That was truly original and awesome. Hope there is a part two?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Oh my god please continue this!
buxkxie chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
there is one word - Hot!
7starfish7 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
It would really suck if Olivia got a flat tire and someone . . . idk maybe me. . . went over to help him out. Hot damn that was smut-tastic! A little OOC but totally hot. And I like that you tried a new writing style. Really good. Mmmk, going to take a cold shower now. Great one-shot.
Little Kakau chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Your perv brain works very well. Loved this cyber fic. I never thought about this. :)
modfeminist85 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Really hot. Sequel please.
BrittanyLS chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Whew! Very, very hot!
The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Nice! update? (:
Kris298 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Very hot!

I love this! You did a great job alternating the points of view between the two of them. I will never be able to watch that scene in 'Pursuit' the same way again.

Too bad she doesn't have one of the sedans...could cut that twenty minutes down to ten. ;)
Anulka13 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Lmao! Great ending with Liv! Could actually see it happening. But You my dear little munchkin need to give us the 20 min after scene too! No way you are just going to leave us hangin' no way Jose!

Did I say I love your dirty mind ;)
emz chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
CONTINUE PLEASE CONTINUE! Don't leave me hanging! PLEASE! MORE! PLEASE!
PerProteggere chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
"Screw our schedules I'll be over in twenty."

What it's really saying: "Screw our schedules, I'll be over soon to fuck you until the sun rises and maybe I'll tie you up while I'm at it."
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