That is a brilliant insite

Okay but quick up date the slave or serf worker is the over welmingly largest class n the hegemony so in this seinario the overwhelming margority of batterians would be legal teri just say and give just how mutch the average batterian hates his government and the minial amount of egucation and life skills aloud I think 5 millions being kind of conservative

Well given most of the batterians where just slaves to other batterians I be to hell with the slave owners but the freed slave should be imbrased with open arms because they where in the exact same bout as us and they didn’t have the ability to fight back. Also I imagine most of the slave owners cast are probably dead or fleeing from there life’s right now so ya we gottem

Quit defending the council they look the other way and alawd the batterians to practice slavery for hundreds of years they new they had violated citidal law buy opening dormant mass relays they new they where exterminating another sentence speacies and they ignored it all because it was making them money quit simping

So again they don’t care about the batterains using slave even kid napping there own people but the thought of some one being more powerful then then

So rather then just admitted the truth they new about the humans and the hegemony started everything because we let them keep kidnapping and inslaving are own people instead of just sheting slavery bown when we had the chance. There going to side with the batterians who they’ve been irrashally defending fever cents first contact. Just to save face and not admit we took there money and look the other way

Atopical battarin is either I slave owner deserve it a slave begging for death or a criminal invould in the slave trade so ya still largely on the humans side

I don't have any sympathy for Xeno scum

I don't really care about sad innocent Batarians man.

You knowingly set the fic up to basically make the entire audience yearn for revenge porn. Don't try and shame us now for wanting it.

For me, the best ending is the successful Cerberus assimilation. No filthy xenos will ever dominate humanity again!

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Hey, aren't these basically the "In-Vitros" from "Space: Above and Beyond"?

Unsure if you still look up comments at this point in time, but just wanting to let you know I almost wish your writing was the actual game series.

alright is - already is

near-pariety - near-parity

beuracrats - bureaucrats

You really should trust your spellchecker more, I've noticed a number of typos that a spellchecker would have found, so you either ignored it, or maybe you didn't use spellcheck?
The thought alone makes me cringe a bit :-(