|Reviews for Metal Sonic and Snorlax team up to defeat Scout|
| thatwasntababyruth chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
nice twis endnig. i like the creative and i didt new wsich games or movie is come nextt. DENIS ahha
| no chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
| no chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
| chaotic-iak chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
...okay, this hurts my eyes and my view.
1. It's K-rated. It must be suitable for everyone that can read and understand it. Why are there profanity and violence? They are T-rated, at least.
2. You need to fix your spelling. Sure, a little part of the story is okay (and by "little", I mean this *mispelled* word in this review), but there are too much.
So, you might want to fix it for good than get the bad way: deletion of story, or further, ban of account.