Reviews for Advantage
Chibi Yachiru-chan chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Hah so good man I simply loved this fic. You brought out the characters well.
Thank you for writing this :3
ayushi chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Waaaahhh this was so good xD I had the exact same headcanon!
Cannas chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Haru must be very, very drunk. 0.o. Seriously now, five years nothing than fighting, and then suddenly she wants Gokudera? Though I like the story, it's awesome
VampireAreej chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
detrametal chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
madamoisellemischief chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
ooohhh steamy and is this TYL? yep, you made the story just the way i liekkkk

oliviaotakusama101 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
omg that was so good 4 ur first gokuharu fic! i like it, sweet and well written. i hope to read some more gokuharu fics from u in the future, this i was awesome compared to my first gokuharu fic... well done sweetness
Wamakai chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Yikes! Haru drunk is a rather scary thought... But nice fanfic. I kinda wish I was Haru now! Gosh!
GokuHaru chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
i think its rated m?
Hurricane59Uri chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Wow, That's actually pretty good. Extra bonus for "seme"Haru! XD Gokudera-kun must I've grown really considerate to try resisting Haru's charme.

Also, I may be wrong, but I felt like Gokudera really had some true interest in Haru (besides her provoking), but being the "Gokudera" he is, he hid it well enough.

And, yes, Haru: who does still care for the Prince Charming? Let's all go for a hot Smoking Bomb! XD
Iceyicecream chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
wow i guess Haru is really drunk or really in love with Gokudera
puripri chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
ahhh i loveee this pairing,the fic is so good,

but I wonder what happens after the final.

good job!
Yoshi333 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
This pairing has really grown on me over time i would love to see more fics with them as a couple ] i really liked this hope you're considering writing more fics for this pairing. Yoshi x x
Ceyrai chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Hm. I've got mixed feelings about this one.

THE GOOD NEWS: I find it rather hot. They DO have such chemistry together, and the bickering (particularly in this fic) strangely exemplifies that. All that sexual tension. GYAH. -fans self- Lovely. Plus Gokudera trying to be a gentleman is rather sweet. And I only realized, him being nice for once is actually... smexy. GYAH.

THE NOT-SO-GOOD NEWS: I kind of feel that it's Haru who's taking advantage of Gokudera - the suddenness of her attraction to him feels... forced? I guess. Especially after coming from the emotional upheaval of seeing Tsuna and Kyoko officially together.

Still, ignoring the Tsuna-and-Kyoko part, it was written well - the plot was okay, the grammar and syntax is good, though there's still some room for improvement. And you ended it exactly where it should end. And the bonus of Haru being all dominant... again, there is no word for it but GYAH. XD

Thanks for my GokuHaru serving for the week! :D
EK12 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Lol! And nice job! Great though, if I'm to wonder what will happen in the morning!
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