Reviews for The Headmaster
Northwind Tweak chapter 19 . 10/7
i know you have not updated in some time. but i am looking forward to the next chapter. please keep writing this story. its excellently done and well thought out
SortingHat chapter 3 . 9/8
It would be cool if Harry decided to make electricity available in Hogwarts. Eventually muggles will have to learn about the magic society. Half truths are frowned upon and an honest society will not live by lies.

Lies always come in twos and wind up in tangled webs even if well intentioned and the shit will just blow back their way when muggles do discover the cover ups. You can't keep *modifying* people's God given brains forever without long term consequences to both the person and the flow of nature.

I imagine all the magic being used actually messes up the atmosphere since I think it's related to magnetic fields and all the Wizards holding wands each time they cause *atoms* and *particles* to excite each time a spell is casted.

The particles never go back to their exact state as before. I think wands are dangerous and destructive to the environment if not handled with due care.
SortingHat chapter 1 . 9/8
If Harry had lock picking tools he could get out of that cell within 30 seconds if he knew what he was doing and a minute or two at the most. Those cell doors offer nothing but the most basic skeleton key lock and doesn't even have a *block* over the keyhole.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/18
Goose chapter 2 . 7/10
Why does the avatar of a SCOTTISH castle take the name of Mai? Really? Makes no sense.
s-david-m chapter 19 . 7/4
Interesting cliffhanger! Don't leave us hanging too long!
Jannafrancine chapter 19 . 6/15
Great story. I hope you find the time to update sometime.
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 19 . 5/15
Exciting chapter.

I liked the bit of Harry's magical-self being in lust and wanting to merge with Hermione's magical-self - cute and funny.

Well that was disturbing... that the horcruxes are stronger than anticipated, and that MoldyShorts feels better after having one destroyed.

I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.

Well done - keep up the good work.
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 18 . 5/15
Wow, Moody is quite tough and heroic with his holding it together long enough to get himself, Tonks and Mme. Bones to the safety of Hogwarts.

I like how Harry delegated to the teachers so that he would have their input/assistance in coming up with potential solutions for the various needs/demands of Hogwarts.

Harry has some highly developed ideas about magic. Neat to see how his mind is expanding from both his bond with Hermione, and the bond with Hogwarts.

That last bit with the sludgy tar-like pool of the remains of MoldyShorts horcrux is disturbing.

Well done - keep up the good work.

.-.-. error found needing correction:
'Similar spots stained the grass outlining the bodies of Tonks and Amelia although there's was less so; ...' ["there's" ought to be "theirs"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 17 . 5/15
I feel really uncomfortable that MoldyShorts can just waltz into Number 12 Grimmauld Place whenever he wishes. Why the heck doesn't Dumbledore have that location under the fidelis (spelling?) charm?

With there being a whole unoccupied village located within/under Hogwarts, Harry could house all of the British wizarding people and keep them safe from MoldyShorts and his Death Nibblers.

It is too cool that Harry is able to detect exactly who it is that enters through Hogwarts wards.

Well done - keep up the good work.

.-.-. error found needing correction:
'"... what makes the difference in having power and strenght is realized: intent. ..."' ["strenght" ought to be "strength"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 16 . 5/14
Poor Harry for having to conduct job interviews for the various teaching positions.

Poor Prof. Binns for having been trapped in Hogwarts all those years.

EEK! I do believe that Harry has just been gobbled up by one of MoldyShort's spying picture/paintings on one of the wall of Hogwarts.

Well done - keep up the good work.
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 15 . 5/14
Bummer about the Death Nibblers having robbed one of Hogwarts' bank vaults.

Loved the teasing Harry and Mai were giving Hermione about her new relationship with Harry.

Well done - keep up the good work.
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 14 . 5/14
Woah, cool visualization there of the fiery winged demon-type creature there in Hermione's head that Harry had to battle before helping her to slay the MoldyShort shadow parasite critter.

Good story.

Well done - keep up the good work.
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 13 . 5/14
It is scary to think of MoldyShorts having a foothold in Hermione's mind. At least she sensed it and has been trying to deal with it in a way to keep others safe. She is lucky to have a good friend in Luna, and a sweetheart ready-to-be in Harry.

Bummer about Xeno running low on the potion that is allowing him to stay alive and at Luna's side.

Well done - keep up the good work.

.-.-. errors found needing correction:
1) '... glancing warily at his ow.' ["ow" ought to be "owl"];
2) 'Whatever he goblins want probably can't though.' ["he goblins want" ought to be "the goblins want"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 12 . 5/14
Thank goodness that both Albus and Aberforth are still alive... bummer about the people from Hogsmeade.

What did MoldyShorts do to Hermione (other than plant seeds of doubt in her dreams about herself, and that she will be the downfall of Harry)? Whatever it is, I hope that they can remove it and its influence on her so that she may make a complete recovery, you know?

Well done - keep up the good work.
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