Reviews for The Headmaster
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 19 . 5/15
Exciting chapter.

I liked the bit of Harry's magical-self being in lust and wanting to merge with Hermione's magical-self - cute and funny.

Well that was disturbing... that the horcruxes are stronger than anticipated, and that MoldyShorts feels better after having one destroyed.

I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 18 . 5/15
Wow, Moody is quite tough and heroic with his holding it together long enough to get himself, Tonks and Mme. Bones to the safety of Hogwarts.

I like how Harry delegated to the teachers so that he would have their input/assistance in coming up with potential solutions for the various needs/demands of Hogwarts.

Harry has some highly developed ideas about magic. Neat to see how his mind is expanding from both his bond with Hermione, and the bond with Hogwarts.

That last bit with the sludgy tar-like pool of the remains of MoldyShorts horcrux is disturbing.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

.-.-. error found needing correction:
'Similar spots stained the grass outlining the bodies of Tonks and Amelia although there's was less so; ...' ["there's" ought to be "theirs"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 17 . 5/15
I feel really uncomfortable that MoldyShorts can just waltz into Number 12 Grimmauld Place whenever he wishes. Why the heck doesn't Dumbledore have that location under the fidelis (spelling?) charm?

With there being a whole unoccupied village located within/under Hogwarts, Harry could house all of the British wizarding people and keep them safe from MoldyShorts and his Death Nibblers.

It is too cool that Harry is able to detect exactly who it is that enters through Hogwarts wards.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

.-.-. error found needing correction:
'"... what makes the difference in having power and strenght is realized: intent. ..."' ["strenght" ought to be "strength"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 16 . 5/14
Poor Harry for having to conduct job interviews for the various teaching positions.

Poor Prof. Binns for having been trapped in Hogwarts all those years.

EEK! I do believe that Harry has just been gobbled up by one of MoldyShort's spying picture/paintings on one of the wall of Hogwarts.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 15 . 5/14
Bummer about the Death Nibblers having robbed one of Hogwarts' bank vaults.

Loved the teasing Harry and Mai were giving Hermione about her new relationship with Harry.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 14 . 5/14
Woah, cool visualization there of the fiery winged demon-type creature there in Hermione's head that Harry had to battle before helping her to slay the MoldyShort shadow parasite critter.

Good story.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 13 . 5/14
It is scary to think of MoldyShorts having a foothold in Hermione's mind. At least she sensed it and has been trying to deal with it in a way to keep others safe. She is lucky to have a good friend in Luna, and a sweetheart ready-to-be in Harry.

Bummer about Xeno running low on the potion that is allowing him to stay alive and at Luna's side.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

.-.-. errors found needing correction:
1) '... glancing warily at his ow.' ["ow" ought to be "owl"];
2) 'Whatever he goblins want probably can't though.' ["he goblins want" ought to be "the goblins want"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 12 . 5/14
Thank goodness that both Albus and Aberforth are still alive... bummer about the people from Hogsmeade.

What did MoldyShorts do to Hermione (other than plant seeds of doubt in her dreams about herself, and that she will be the downfall of Harry)? Whatever it is, I hope that they can remove it and its influence on her so that she may make a complete recovery, you know?

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 11 . 5/14
Scary stuff - intense chapter.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

.-.-. error found needing correction:
'1:57 P.M. on Thursday June 27th' ["1:57 P.M." ought to be "12:57 P.M."] - as stated in previous chapters, the exams, for Harry, will begin at 1:00 P.M.
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 10 . 5/14
Wow. Things went downhill more quickly than I had anticipated.
* Alec's disappearance/death;
*Kingsley being a P.O.S. Death Eater and candidate for Alec being wherever and in whatever condition;
* Fudge appointing himself as Mugwump, and Umbitch as Minister of Magic;
* Remus having a death sentence upon him for daring to stand-up for Dumbledore during the farce of a trial;
* Mme. Bones being sentenced to Azkaban for daring to spit in the face of the corrupt ministry officials, and thwarting their efforts to apprehend Remus by portkeying the two of them out of the courtroom;
* Harry's explosive reaction to having heard of the details of the reasoning behind the various decisions made for him due to the prophecy, and the horcruxes;
* the damage done to the various resources to be had in the Headmaster's office;
* and finally, Harry having not taken the time to have perform the Vulcan Mind Meld, aka the Coetus bond, with either Hermione or Luna to help him with the upcoming tests imposed upon him by Snape's challenge.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

.-.-. error found needing correction:
'1:50 - Ten minutes to the examinations' ["1:50" ought to be "12:50"]
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 9 . 5/14
Could it be that after being abandoned at the ministry by Umbitch, to be set upon by Death Eaters, and then to face the humiliation of being treated decently by Headmaster Potter (especially after feeling and seeing how differently Hogwarts is now that Harry is in charge) that Draco may turn his back on the poisonous teachings of his childhood? Wouldn't that be a hoot? It would also be a great boon to have Draco as a spy for the Light.

I love it that Harry realizes that he is in love with Hermione. I think that he ought to connect to her to see what is going on inside her and to ask her if she wishes to do then coetis connection bond thingy.

It is too cool that Tonks is so intrusted with the highly sensitive info at the DMLE by Madame Bones, and that by Mme. Bones taking Tonks into her confidence, and visa versa, the Order now has an additional ally, or two, in Mme. Bones and the guy that Mme. Bones has in her confidence on such matters.

Huh, I can't tell if Snape is truly on MoldyShort's side, or if he is only pretending to be, and is actually loyal to the Light.

Great story.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 8 . 5/14
Bummer about MoldyShorts having gotten his dirty mits onto Mai, and thus learning more about topics that he ought not to have been privy to, you know?

I'm glad that Hermione is recovering.

Regarding the last line, I believe that Luna believes that Hermione loves Harry in both a friendly way, and a romantic way, resulting in the strong belief that Hermione would do whatever is necessary to help Harry.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 7 . 5/13
What is Mai's problem? Is she working for, or against Harry and Hermione?

I'm glad that Luna is firmly on the side of Harry and Hermione.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 6 . 5/13
Interesting way to learn. It would be cool to try. During the time after the merge, while assimilating it all, one can ask questions to verify that they understand the concepts properly, you know?

I'm wondering if by Hermione merging with Harry, it would be less painful for Harry to take on the inflow of knowledge from Hogwarts. If so, then that is brilliant.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 5 . 5/13
WOAH! This was a very intense chapter with...
* Harry bonding(?) with the castle's house elves;
* Hogwarts revealing its various secrets to Harry;
* Harry pledging to protect and educate, any and all within its stone walls, (and considers them to be friends and family);
* and lastly, the pain involved with Harry being tied into the wards.

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
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