Reviews for Love in the Darkness
KumoFuzei chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
He stood back up a nd pulled

He stood back up and pulled*

tongue casing me to moan

tongue causing me to moan*

those were the only two mistakes I saw but I really enjoyed the story, you captured a nice moment and it seemed quite realistic for the most part :)
FallenFromGrace1882 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
FIANLLY! Someone other than me, my sister, and our friends notice how dangerously low Sora's hand was.

Yes interesting...how strange to put in that blackout. WHAT REALLY HAPPENED? I WANNA KNOW!

Anyway, I really like it. It's awesome.
The Disorganization chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Awwwwww~... so cute... and sore is so touching riku's butt in that cutscene. great job, 10/10 Metaphorical hugs ~Gexie of The Disorganization~ _
XCiViLwArX chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Very cute i wish that was how the scene went down, nice job